I took this shot today. I kinda like the idea but I feel something is missing from it. Comments please
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polvoronn Member  245 posts Joined Aug 2005 Location: Vancouver, Canada More info | Apr 11, 2006 21:40 | #1 I took this shot today. I kinda like the idea but I feel something is missing from it. Comments please HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. I'm the best Paolo in the world - Paolo Gaspar
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sugarzebra Cream of the Crop  More info | Apr 11, 2006 21:49 | #2 I like it Paolo, very unique. If you cropped the guy on the right (who needs new shoes) it would create a situation where the object was the only one travelling into the frame, in opposition to everyone else, which may help the shot (however move the object into the centre of the frame which is a compositional no no). Scott
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Seefutlung Goldmember  3,262 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2006 Location: SoCal More info | Apr 11, 2006 22:01 | #3 Assuming that the idea is to show the colorful to the uncolorful ... then your problem is lack of equal comparison. The girl is extremely dominate while by contrast the pants are OOF or obscure. You need to give better representation forthe viewer to compare .. i.e. next time shoot from the side so all parties are in focus and treated somewhat equally ... - Unsharp At Any Speed -
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Robert_Lay Cream of the Crop  7,546 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA More info | Apr 11, 2006 22:22 | #4 Excellent composition. If I were to be shooting it over, I would try to get in a bit more of the walkway in the foreground in order to have a bit more foundation on which all of the people are standing - as it is, their feet are too close to the bottom of the frame. Bob
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sando Goldmember  2,868 posts Joined Apr 2006 More info | Apr 11, 2006 23:52 | #5 It needs a top half of that girl... i wanna perv! - Matt
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TeeWhy "Monkey's uncle"  10,596 posts Likes: 5 Joined Feb 2006 Location: Pasadena, CA More info | Apr 12, 2006 02:15 | #6 Your right, I thought it just needed the subject to be more off centered to the left by cropping off the left side a bit, but that didn't do it. I can't put my finger on it, but I too think something is missing. Gallery: http://tomyi.smugmug.com/
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Apr 13, 2006 00:23 | #7 thanks for all the tips guys! Seefutlong, I totally know what you mean. I first caught this girl standing on the curb next to a bunch of 'normally' dressed people waiting to cross the street. THAT was the shot that I wanted cuz I then they would've all been on the same focal plane. However, it was 1pm and it was busy downtown so I wasn't able to snap a decent picture w/o someone walking into the frame. I'm the best Paolo in the world - Paolo Gaspar
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Hellashot Goldmember 4,617 posts Likes: 2 Joined Sep 2004 Location: USA More info | Apr 13, 2006 18:35 | #8  Permanent banThe rest of the girl is missing! 5D, Drebel, EOS-3, K1000
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The colors are also way too saturated - tone them down so the pink is not so neon.