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clengster_77

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Apr 15, 2006 05:06 | #1

let me know your comments

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cleng

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Mathiau

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Apr 17, 2006 12:20 | #2

mmmmmm, deep fried shrimmp!, Looks a little too bright on the shrimp but the rich colors on the black and red make it nice!

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Robert_Lay

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Apr 17, 2006 15:59 | #3

The fried shrimp got blown out. There should be detail in there and it got lost in the overexposure (significantly large areas there are sitting right on 255 in all 3 channels).
If you shot RAW, did you recover as much detail as possible? If you did not shoot RAW, kiss it goodbye.

Beer and butts is excellent. I llike the composition, exposure, lighting and color balance.

Most of all I like the smoke coming up - that makes the picture!

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clengster_77
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Apr 18, 2006 04:08 | #4

thanks guys! i knew it, i should've just left the shrimp pic as it is too much pp that's why

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cleng

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