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Apr 17, 2006 20:24 | #1

in asbury park , nj

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Robert_Lay

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Apr 17, 2006 20:59 | #2

Very interesting pattern. The problem is in isolating from the distractions - very simple to crop away everything in the upper portion that you don't feel is contributing to the pattern.
Very nice exposure and excellent lighting.
Congratulations.

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Apr 18, 2006 17:26 | #3

Thanks Robert :]
Is this a better crop, do ya think?

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Apr 18, 2006 17:33 as a reply to @ pup's post | #4

Pup,
Crop even more to see if you like it...

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Apr 18, 2006 17:35 | #5

Something like this?

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Apr 18, 2006 17:41 as a reply to @ pup's post | #6

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Apr 18, 2006 17:45 | #7

Hi Visuallynice: Thanks for the crop. I'm new to PP. What did you do to get that effect?

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Apr 18, 2006 17:51 as a reply to @ pup's post | #8

pup wrote:
Something like this?

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Yes ... IMHO ... yes
As Robert intimated, if you go "pattern" go pattern !
(I might even go so far as to get rid of the small amount of garbage in the lower right.)
You did a great job holding the highlight and shadow detail!!

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Apr 18, 2006 18:00 | #9

Ya that garbage was bothering me, actually....

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Apr 18, 2006 20:13 as a reply to @ pup's post | #10

pup wrote:
Ya that garbage was bothering me, actually....

Instinct baffles rules, all the time.

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Apr 18, 2006 21:25 | #11

Visuallynice... I agree with your signature...

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