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Apr 17, 2006 22:14 |  #1

was out and about today

IMAGE: http://images16.fotki.com/v298/photos/8/892701/3445532/bb_tower_up-vi.jpg?500333
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IMAGE: http://images16.fotki.com/v287/photos/8/892701/3445532/seuss_book-vi.jpg?500357

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IMAGE: http://images16.fotki.com/v298/photos/8/892701/3445532/church1-vi.jpg?500318

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IMAGE: http://images14.fotki.com/v258/photos/8/892701/3445532/bench_3people-vi.jpg?500319


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IMAGE: http://images16.fotki.​com/v299/photos/8/8927​01/3445532/grave_house​1-vi.jpg?500462


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Apr 17, 2006 22:26 |  #2

Nice shots, i love the 1rst one...

what settings did you use? whan lenses?

nice shots!


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Apr 17, 2006 22:35 as a reply to  @ dtufino's post |  #3

dtufino wrote:
Nice shots, i love the 1rst one...

what settings did you use? whan lenses?

nice shots!

lens is the 17-85 tv1/50 av 18 iso 100
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Apr 19, 2006 20:45 as a reply to  @ Createdlight's post |  #4
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speaking of Dr. Suess Land, definately would have loved to of visited that place when i was younger...where exactly is that?

i like the pictures because they are very interesting and colorful. As for using it in av mode 18 sounds a little on the high side, but doesn;t really matter too much. Even though in some of the pictures i would have liked to of seen how they looked with a smaller depth of field.




  
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Apr 19, 2006 21:41 as a reply to  @ edel33's post |  #5

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speaking of Dr. Suess Land, definately would have loved to of visited that place when i was younger...where exactly is that?

i like the pictures because they are very interesting and colorful. As for using it in av mode 18 sounds a little on the high side, but doesn;t really matter too much. Even though in some of the pictures i would have liked to of seen how they looked with a smaller depth of field.




Dr. Suess is in Springfield Ma at the National memorial Quadrangle...here's a link.....http://www.catinthehat​.org/ (external link)
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Apr 19, 2006 21:52 |  #6

that first one is very cool and abstract. The rest are well done but dont really interest me, no really strong compositions but they may appeal to human and humorous appeal.


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Apr 19, 2006 22:00 |  #7

Number one is very nice! 5 & 6 are not bad, but nothing extraordinary, the rest look like snapshots for your family album.


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Apr 20, 2006 16:41 as a reply to  @ rssfhs's post |  #8

I like #1 (straight up) and #5 (the bridge)


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Apr 20, 2006 17:30 |  #9

Thanks for your input's, I agree number one, the tower shot is the better of the bunch. I'll try to be more creative in my shots
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Apr 20, 2006 18:03 as a reply to  @ Createdlight's post |  #10

Createdlight wrote:
Thanks for your input's, I agree number one, the tower shot is the better of the bunch. I'll try to be more creative in my shots
gary

Creativity is of course important, but composition even more so. In photo #9 for example, one leg of the bench is clipped. On the top, there is some distracting element.

Try thinking like a child when photographing. If a child were to paint a bench, would he or she cut off one of the legs like that and add a spot of unrelated color to the top? I doubt it. Keep you photos simple and the subject clear. That's my advice to you.


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Apr 20, 2006 18:39 |  #11

1st shot is great - but would have been awesome if the lines could be 'calibrated'. Is it possible to take another go at it? Would love to see it.


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Apr 20, 2006 18:44 as a reply to  @ GAV's post |  #12

Sorry, I didn't like the first. It's focal point was uninteresting and the cloud distracts the eye.

I did like the first blue bench for it subject and simplicity. It would be great if it were photoshop'd some. Like putting it somewhere else or removing the distracting element behind the bench.


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Apr 20, 2006 21:24 as a reply to  @ GAV's post |  #13

GAV wrote:
1st shot is great - but would have been awesome if the lines could be 'calibrated'. Is it possible to take another go at it? Would love to see it.

lines calibrated? what do you mean? is this an lens defect that I should have taken in account?
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