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Sean-Mcr Goldmember  1,813 posts Likes: 4 Joined Apr 2005 Location: Manchester, England More info | Apr 20, 2006 19:41 | #1
I don't know what good composition is.... Sometimes for me composition has to do with a certain brightness or a certain coming to restness and other times it has to do with funny mistakes. There's a kind of rightness and wrongness and sometimes I like rightness and sometimes I like wrongness. Diane Arbus
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SRPhotographic Senior Member  318 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2005 Location: Gainesville, FL More info | Apr 20, 2006 23:34 | #2 It's a nice image, but it can be vastly improved. First of all- it's farrr toooo busy! Too much detail and contrast takes away from the subject. Cropping out about 1/6 of the right of the frame and a bit of the top will improve the photo. Also, it's a little dark in the midtones and shadows. "There is nothing worse than a sharp image of a fuzzy concept" -Ansel Adams
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chrishunt Goldmember  1,901 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jan 2005 Location: Denver, Colorado More info | Apr 21, 2006 00:01 | #3 I like it. The color and busyness add to the feeling of the photo. It has a really classic look to it.
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condyk Africa's #1 Tour Guide  20,887 posts Likes: 22 Joined Mar 2005 Location: Birmingham, UK More info | Apr 21, 2006 03:15 | #4 Horses for courses ... I like as is. Cropping the top cuts peoples heads off! Of course, he could always have gone for the Bokah'd look and then you could do that and crop the right a tad. I think a better title is 'I'll have what he's having' so the focus is on the girl https://photography-on-the.net …/showthread.php?t=1203740
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Sean-Mcr THREAD STARTER Goldmember 1,813 posts Likes: 4 Joined Apr 2005 Location: Manchester, England More info | Apr 21, 2006 06:56 | #5 The idea is that its busy its a street shot not a portrait, Dave it's line from when harry met sally. the scene from the diner where Melanie Griffith fakes an orgasm and the old lady turns around to the waitress and says that line. I don't know what good composition is.... Sometimes for me composition has to do with a certain brightness or a certain coming to restness and other times it has to do with funny mistakes. There's a kind of rightness and wrongness and sometimes I like rightness and sometimes I like wrongness. Diane Arbus
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