Looking for critiques/suggestions/what have you
These are after PP. The last image was really quite blurry beforehand. It's still a bit OOF but I think I can get a decent small print from it, if I wanted to. TIA for your comments!
whiskaz Goldmember 1,503 posts Joined Apr 2006 Location: Parkersburg, WV More info | Apr 23, 2006 07:01 | #1 Looking for critiques/suggestions/what have you Jeremy | Gear List | EyeDigress - A Photoblog
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Apr 23, 2006 07:02 | #2 Jeremy | Gear List | EyeDigress - A Photoblog
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bikerider Goldmember 3,909 posts Likes: 1 Joined Apr 2004 Location: Woy Woy, NSW, Australia More info | I like these very lively portraits, the subject is very engaged and I like the tone of these images. There is some blurriness, that 50mm lens takes a bit of getting used to with that shallow dof. It looks like your point of focus is off, keep it on the eyes! Eos 6D Mk1, 300D & G7x modified for Infrared, 17-40f4L, 70-200f4L, 100-400 f5.6 ISL, 15mm f2.8, 50mm f1.4, various Lensbaby lenses, a few tripods, flash, GoPro 7 black.
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Apr 23, 2006 07:35 | #4 Thanks, Roger. Yesterday was the first day I tried giving up on focus, recompose and instead messed a bit with the AF points, setting them to the right or left depending on the picture. There's still some focus/recompose but I was aiming for the eyes! My intentions were good Jeremy | Gear List | EyeDigress - A Photoblog
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Another... slight yellow tint to it (on purpose) but not sure if it works or if I like it. Jeremy | Gear List | EyeDigress - A Photoblog
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bikerider Goldmember 3,909 posts Likes: 1 Joined Apr 2004 Location: Woy Woy, NSW, Australia More info | Hi whiskaz, colour wise I like your third shot the best, the slightly cyan bias goes so well with her blue shirt......the yellow I don't go for much lol. She is a very attractive lady with fantastic eyes, an excellent model for practice. With the face straight on I focus between the eyes, three quarter on I focus on the nearest eye with aperture set accordingly to get both in focus. That's my practice method and I'm trying to shoot as much portrait as I can to improve. Eos 6D Mk1, 300D & G7x modified for Infrared, 17-40f4L, 70-200f4L, 100-400 f5.6 ISL, 15mm f2.8, 50mm f1.4, various Lensbaby lenses, a few tripods, flash, GoPro 7 black.
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Apr 24, 2006 06:35 | #7 Thanks again, Roger. I'll keep that in mind. Plan to try a few on the tripod to see if sharpness improves but you sorta lose freedom of movement. I'm lucky enough to call her my wife so using her for practice shouldn't be a problem. She hates having her picture taken but loves to be in front of the camera. Go figure. Jeremy | Gear List | EyeDigress - A Photoblog
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pwenwatkin Senior Member 606 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: Ipswich, Australia More info | Oct 20, 2006 21:48 | #8 Nice shots It's Owen not Pwen!
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