Kite Boy..Please C&C

OK, I'm trying to see if my gear will work for anything other than performing arts, LOL. I went to a field close by the house to shoot pics of our 2 dogs playing in the creek. I was lucky enough for this cute young boy to come along and enjoy a wonderful morning flying a kite.

I'm welcome to feedback good or bad!

I did post this in people but what I'm really looking for is some expert perception of these..


#1 Slacker

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These must be really bad....no thoughts on how to make them better?

i think they're great...

I think #1 is definintely the best, but i don't like the slack.. you may want to try editing it into a straight line...

#2 is neat, but same problem...

#3 is confusing with the angle of the line,

and #4 seems a little awkward... like he's strangling himself.

... that said, you got some great shots.

Photos aren't too bad at all. It does look like a Charlie Brown kite flying experience though, based on the angle of the line.

Thanks for the feedback. I guess I liked the "slack" because it was unusual. I guess unusual does not always make a good shot. I took about 30 shots and they have the string straight.

What about the color in #4 how does that look?


Here is one more...any better?

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ding ding ding! we have a winner!