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George Chew

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Apr 27, 2006 09:16 | #1

Greetings,
I'm not very sure about the composition and depth of field. Please comment. Thanks and enjoy...

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nehpets

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Apr 27, 2006 09:59 as a reply to @ cjsa's post | #3

parts of the flower seem to be blown-out.

the focus seems a bit off...

but the composition is nice :]

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Robert_Lay

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Apr 27, 2006 18:12 | #4

I think the composition could be improved with 5% removed from the top end of the image.

The lighting is excellent and the color balance and exposure seem to be very good.

The depth of focus is a little shallow but not serious.

Congratulations!

Bob
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George Chew
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Apr 28, 2006 05:54 as a reply to @ Robert_Lay's post | #5

Greetings,
Thanks for all your kind comments. Thanks again. Enjoy...

5DII and a few L lenses.

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