Yesterday's Shoot! Feedback requested. (8 Images - 56K Warning)

Still working my way through 200+ images, but have done some quick post processing on the shots below. Would love some constructive criticism and/or feedback.

All shot available light on 20D + 50mm f1.8.

Very nice ... too bad they're both so unattractive

bpuppy wrote:
Very nice ... too bad they're both so unattractive

A can't do much about what God gave them...

First look and they're all good except the first which looks like a divorcing shoot not a wedding shoot.

Having second thoughts about the rusty iron boatshed as a background?

I agree with Carzee.....it was a relief to see them so happy in the other shots. Very nice series.

If you think they're unatractive you should see some of the people around here! I think that woman's reasonably attractive.

Nice photos, I like them! I know they're proofs, when you process them full pay attention to WB and bump the contrast on the B&W shots. If you want to give me a high res version of #1 i'll run it thru my B&W workflow - my email is on the front page of my personal website (see my profile).

In #4 i'd desaturate the red thing between them, it's distracting. Take it to -70 instead of -100 perhaps.

Thanks Tim,

I shoot something through to you now.

For a wedding shot 1 needs some fun injected into it.(not available in PS)
But i love the mood!!!!

The rest are OK they need a little something to make them sparkle a bit.
Agree with Tim (Sexist Comment Coming) If she was cawling up the sheets towards me It wouldnt be the latest Harry Potter book id be reaching for.

Tim I think he joked about being unattractive That is a very handsome couple.

Your shots are, just like the last set, GREAT! You really have a great style. I agree thought that I would like to see more happy faces in wedding pictures, but the pics themselves are still wonderful!

Ah yeah, I get it now, thanks for pointing it out! I often read threads in a bit of a hurry.

I probably should have clarified that this couple have been married for 12 months.

They agreed to get kitted up for me to spend a few hours having a mock shoot. It was a lot of fun.

4 and 5 are great! but i agree with carzee about #1, not quite as 'happy' as the others.

great examples of the 50mm f/1.8 lens!!
would love to see more if possible

I really like them,although a lot of the corners have vignetting,which I don`t care for-CS2 can sort that for you.Apologies if it was intentional.
Interesting background?

Lookin nice. My first wedding was last weekend and they rushed us so much to get the photos done, Im so not happy with them, and the bride wasnt even in a wedding dress, but they werea very nice couple.