Hi I am looking for advice and constructive critism on this photo. This was taken with a 20D and a 17-85mm efs Canon lens. Thank you.
uglytuna Member 59 posts Joined Jul 2006 More info | Jul 02, 2006 21:39 | #1 Hi I am looking for advice and constructive critism on this photo. This was taken with a 20D and a 17-85mm efs Canon lens. Thank you. It's better to regret things you have done than to regret things you haven't done
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SWPhotoImaging Goldmember 3,231 posts Joined Nov 2003 Location: No. Calif. More info | Jul 02, 2006 21:50 | #2 I think it's nicely composed, and the exposure looks good. The lamp post being dead-center bugs me a little, but not badly. SWPhoto-Imaging
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HikinMike Walkin' Like a Penguin Now! More info | The excess sky above the moon doesn't really add anything to the photo, so I might be tempted to crop it out. Otherwise I think its a good photo as far as composition and exposure. Images in the Backcountry
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Jul 02, 2006 23:32 | #4 Hi do you think that with the colors going from dark blue and fading down that it needs the extra sky? Thanks everyone for the input. It's better to regret things you have done than to regret things you haven't done
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HikinMike Walkin' Like a Penguin Now! More info | With all that sky above the moon, I find myself searching for something of interest in the dark blue sky...only to find just dark blue sky. If you had a few clouds, I'd say keep it for sure, but since it's bare...I'd say crop it out. Images in the Backcountry
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landdownunder Member 33 posts Joined Jun 2006 More info | Jul 02, 2006 23:47 | #6 I'd crop the sky, no higher than the distance between the lamp and moon.
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Jul 02, 2006 23:53 | #7 I would have stepped twice to the left, including that half cut light pole, and leaving the main pole off center. And as said here, I would have lowered the perspective to include more water and its reflection, rather than so much sky. This can be done by getting closer to the dock's edge, or lower/higher, and tilting the camera about, toying until you get the desired perspective. --Mario
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HrcRacing Goldmember 2,019 posts Joined Aug 2005 Location: NE Florida, USA More info | Using the "rule of thirds", it does look like you could have brought the horizon up on this shot. Also, I agree that moving left a bit would have brought the other post in and would have added to the image. Robert
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Plan9 Member 233 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2006 More info | For the moon, I would either make it bigger (I.E. take a shot of it with a longer lens and photoshop that in) or photoshop it out entirely.
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Suedezu Goldmember 1,512 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2005 Location: Romania More info | Jul 03, 2006 01:55 | #10 Hi! General gallery: http://andreimorar.zenfolio.com
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