Keiffer Goldmember  2,259 posts Joined May 2005 Location: Orlando Fl. More info | Jul 20, 2006 07:12 | #1 Hey guys, Just messing around in photoshop trying to get a nice pic out of what I had. What do you think? Please give honest critiques, I need this in order to better myself.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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SuzyView Cream of the Crop  More info | Jul 20, 2006 07:23 | #2 I like it. Got rid of the hand and the focus from the background to the subject. I would give her face just a little more color, if that suits you. Otherwise, good choices. Suzie - Still Speaking Canonese!
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PAFC2004 Goldmember  1,084 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: Adelaide, Australia More info | Jul 20, 2006 07:27 | #3 |
Jul 20, 2006 16:23 | #4 Thanks guys, Suzy actually I felt the same way and did just that, I added more color to her face and Pacf, I was purposely trying to over process it, I was practicing the Mizuno airbrush tutorial. Also I was trying to make her look thiner, I've had a few request for that lately, Go figure lol. Heres another of the same shot just with a glow effect added.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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MagicallyDelicious Goldmember 4,083 posts Likes: 2 Joined May 2006 Location: Southport UK More info | Jul 20, 2006 16:36 | #5 i like the edited version every mistake is a lesson learned
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Jul 21, 2006 08:25 | #6 Thanks Magic, The more I look at the glow one, I think it looks to bright in the face. Or is that ok?
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Rachellebee27 Goldmember  1,271 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: Utah More info | Jul 21, 2006 08:30 | #7 I don't like how her back dissapears at a weird angle, it just doesn't look right. Clone in some from her arm tweeked at about a 20 degree angle and you'll be good to go. Kaylene
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dkenney Senior Member  752 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: I live on the east coast of the US More info | Jul 21, 2006 09:25 | #8 I think you did a great job thinning her. Here are my only thoughts... I would darken some of the more drastic highlights on her face to give a more real than plastic look. This will also add to the thinning. And after removing the hand, her back doesn't really look real, I guess because no back is there. I like the glamor effect and the blurring of the background. One more thing, I would try to whiten her teeth just a touch, nothing drastic. Canon 5D Mii, 30D, 20D * Canon EF 16-35mm f/2.8L II USM * Canon EF 28-70mm f/2.8 L USM Canon EF 70-200mm f/4L USM * Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro USM * EF 50mm 1.8 II * Lensbaby 2
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geofftelforduk Senior Member  317 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Northern Ireland More info | Jul 21, 2006 09:50 | #9 Doesnt do anything for me I'm afraid! You seem to have removed part of her back while removing the hand!! ---------------
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dkenney Senior Member 752 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2006 Location: I live on the east coast of the US More info | Jul 21, 2006 09:52 | #10 If you crop this photo with an 8x10 ratio keeping all the top, it removes the back issue and creates a more flattering figure. Canon 5D Mii, 30D, 20D * Canon EF 16-35mm f/2.8L II USM * Canon EF 28-70mm f/2.8 L USM Canon EF 70-200mm f/4L USM * Canon EF 100mm f/2.8 Macro USM * EF 50mm 1.8 II * Lensbaby 2
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98photo Goldmember  1,419 posts Joined May 2006 Location: South Carolina, USA More info | Jul 21, 2006 09:55 | #11 I also don't like how the back dissapears at an odd angle. It just isn't right for her face type to have that skinny of a torso. Just add a little triangle of shirt and you're good to go. I like the blurring of the bg and the glow filter. The glowing outline on the back of the shirt is slightly distracting though, IMO.
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Jul 21, 2006 18:23 | #12 Thank you all so much for your valuable input, I will defintely add some "back" back in. I will also try to darken the highlights in her face and fix the glowing back of her shirt(Didn't even notice that, Thanks for bringing that to my attention). Thanks again for your support and input.
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photog_87 Senior Member  767 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: Halifax, Nova Scotia More info | Jul 21, 2006 20:08 | #13 I would actually bring back some punch in the necklace myself! commercial site
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Jul 21, 2006 20:22 | #14 Is it just me or is there something wierd about her eyes too ? Canon R3 l RF600mm F4 L | RF100-500mm L IS l RF14-35mm L l RF24-105mm F4 L l RF 100 2.8 L | RF 1.4 & 2.0 Ext l RF100mm 2.8 Macro L l Speedlite 580EX II l 600EX II Speedlite l Manfrotto MK055 Pro3 Tripod l Manfrotto MPMXPROA4 Monopd with XPRO monopod+fluid base l Image ProGraf 1000 Printer
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Jul 21, 2006 20:26 | #15 Are you talking about the pupils being wrong? I had to redo her eyes because the original the eys lost their color, so I did what the Muzuno tutorial said to do and yeah, mine didn't come out as natural as his did lol
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