BW experimental

hello all!, ive never really experimented with stuff like this but i tried with a flood light and a carboard wrapped around it like a tube to pint the light to my subject. well anyways i see lots of room for improvements any suggestions tips or critisism welcome

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Well done with the homemade snoot!

I think it's beautiful, although her shoulder strap and anklet are a bit distracting. The lighting is quite effective. Perhaps clone out the bit of her arm that is showing on the right hand side of the photo and her left toes?

you know, for the items you used to create this effect, i'd say you did a pretty sweet job. How powerful was the floodlight you used? I thought about doing the same with a two mill, but i needed to find a way to diffuse the light.

THANKS to those who commented...

it says 500 watt max...not sure if thats the actualy power.

it was just an experiment reallly...and i plan on re shooting this maybe with a more controled situation