River Shots (4 images)

Hello all...

This past weekend i took at trip to the river and well of course i took some pictures (thanks to my model ) id like you guys to Critique them, i am trying to improve as much as i can so any constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated...


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in some her skin tones seem a bit saturated, which often happens when working with sunset shots/light

The catchlight in her glasses is distracting as well... maybe just clone it out...

Im sure there is other stuff to comment on, but I'll let everyone else do that

I agree with the glare on her glasses being a distraction. I also find myself looking at the string sticking out of her shirt near her chest. A girl as pretty as her should smile in some of the images. The first and third images are the best with my preference being the first because of the way her hair is blowing in the wind. Nice job.