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Sandy Bottom overlook in Shenandoah National Park, elev. 2705'
MikeR Goldmember 4,319 posts Likes: 7 Joined May 2006 Location: 06478, CT More info | Aug 20, 2006 19:28 | #1 Critiques welcomed Mike R
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Robert_Lay Cream of the Crop 7,546 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA More info | Aug 20, 2006 22:42 | #2 These shots remind me of an art form from decades ago in which different colors of sand were used and a separating strip was used to keep the different mountain ranges separated. Bob
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Aug 21, 2006 12:28 | #3 Beautiful color.. makes me want to run to the highest peak here and set and wait for a chance at a picture this surreal.. wonderfully composed
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Rhinotherunt Looking for a Rock 7,129 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2006 Location: Jasper, AL More info | Aug 21, 2006 15:39 | #4 Cool stuff! I bet it was beautiful and thanks for sharing what you saw. Ryan McGill
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Aug 21, 2006 23:12 | #5 |
overlunge Member 98 posts Joined May 2006 Location: Christchurch, New Zealand More info | Aug 21, 2006 23:19 | #6 Hi Mike, thanks for sharing the shots. Your first shot appeals to me more since the purple in the second one make the whole photo too dominated with the blue tone. Kind regards,
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crackennz Senior Member 374 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: wellington nz More info | Aug 22, 2006 04:12 | #7 love that first photo mike, great shot
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Aug 22, 2006 05:50 | #8 |
overlunge Member 98 posts Joined May 2006 Location: Christchurch, New Zealand More info | Mike R wrote: Thanks crackennz & Scott, How is this crop? I personally prefer this crop than your original #1... but that could just be me Kind regards,
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midnitejam Senior Member 806 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Parma Ohio More info | Robert_Lay wrote: These shots remind me of an art form from decades ago in which different colors of sand were used and a separating strip was used to keep the different mountain ranges separated. They were quite common as commercial decoration in restaurants and such. Very interesting and very well done. Congratulations! This style still exists today in commercial hall ways, Drs' offices, Dentists' offices, resturaunts, etc. The wall hangers are not only photographs, but watercolor, and oil paintings as well. Midnitejam--The happiness in your life depends on the quality of your thoughts.
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staciecd Goldmember 1,383 posts Joined Feb 2004 Location: Baltimore, MD More info | Aug 22, 2006 10:35 | #11 These shots are amazing!!!! I prefer the cropped one. ---------------
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sugarzebra Cream of the Crop More info | Aug 22, 2006 10:37 | #12 Wonderful sunset shots, the 'multi-layered' look is great. Someday I hope to see such a sunset (and have a camera available Scott
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StewartR "your nose is too big" 4,269 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: Maidenhead, UK More info | Aug 22, 2006 13:04 | #13 Can I be critical? www.LensesForHire.co.uk
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Robert_Lay Cream of the Crop 7,546 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA More info | Aug 22, 2006 17:41 | #14 You could very well be right about rotating CW a little. Bob
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StewartR wrote: Can I be critical? It looks to me like the horizons are crooked. Maybe it's just the cloud formations that make the horizons seem crooked when they are in fact straight, but I can't help thinking that both pictures might look a bit better if rotated slightly clockwise. Also, I think I'd go for a vertical crop to end up with an image in portrait orientation. All the interest is in the different layers of colour which are stacked vertically, and I think a vertical orientation would help emphasise that. You haven't got 'EDITING OK' in your profile, so I won't have a go myself. But the kind of crop I think I'd do to #1 would be to remove something like the left-hand 15-20%, the right-hand 35-40%, and the bottom 20-25%. Thanks Scott,midnightjam,scott,stacie,bob and stewart for the comments and suggestions. Here are cropped versions based on stewarts suggestions, Thanks for pointing out the horizon, before I had them printed, I think that this type of crop also works. Mike R
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