A candid with lots of PP, C&C

hi guys
just want some comments on this picture
Is my PP any good and is there anything i could do better?
Please post your comments and critique

Stav

i think it looks fantastic, its subtle and looks great! what did you do to it?

I think you've done a very good job Stav....because you haven't overdone it (i.e. the teeth and eyes are whitened but not too much). The only thing I would do would be to lessen the facial highlights, especially on the nose and right cheek. Good work.

Very very nice. I think the key is to actually hold back. Better to have the person look more human than plastic.

Very nicely done. Color is excellent and as has been mentioned, the spot healing and whitening are just right.

Exactly! Nice candid.

I can't really give you any tips, as you've done a much better job than i could've... I know.... You could give ME the tips!

Really nice job!

Great shot. And outstanding PP work. How did you learn to do this? A class, a book?

well, im 15, i learn fast i actually learnt alot of it myself just seeing how tools work and using them along with others.

Oh, this is what i did to it too:
Changed contrast
changed Levels
Use clone tool
Saturated eyes
Darkened iris
Added saturation
Took all teh yellow saturation away from the teeth
Use healing tool
And i also used the paint tool with opacity about about 28 and flow at about the same and was taking colour samples closest to the area i was working in

Yep, great work. Nicely improved but without overdoing it. Well done.

very good job!

at first glance I thought it was once shot...I was going to say...boy are they identical twins in an identical expression... LOL

love the pp though...

Thanks guys, Love nice comments, good for the Ego Lol

After some more advice i have come up with this!
Any better? or is it worse?