abbe and ellie

A few shots from a recent job.. abbey is the eldest and ellie the young one. These where at their grammas farm.. and they didn't want to put the cats down! C&C welcome

Does the sky look too fake in the first two? I added it in and aint too sure on it!


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On my monitor they look a tad dark. Just a tad. Maybe if you bumb the brightness on them just a smig, but it may be my screen. The background looks lighter than them in some of them, and I really don't prefer that in outdoor shots. Maybe(If you didn't use one) a reflector.

I really like these. They're very cute. It helps to have adorable models.

They also looked a tad dark on my monitor too.. but when I had them printed (proofs) they were brighter! I adjusted number 4 with the backgound darkening. I did use fill flash for it maybe I should have used a reflector instead??

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The girls are really cute and the poses and composition work well. I think the images are quite dark. I see you used a flash - FEC? The light could come up on the subjects quite a bit IMO. And you've chopped their feet off in #2 & #5. Good shots except for that.

Did you use a flash at all? All the shots are underexposed. A fill flash was really needed.