Paige. Tatoo /Bath (CC please)

Just wanted to get some opinions and see what improvements to make. I actually posted these in another forum but didn't get much response. These are only my second pics on here. CC appreciated.

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They are a little dark for my tastes. Add a little light to her face in the second one and it would look much better.

Hmm, for me the tattoo is a little oversaturated. I love the second shot, although agree that there could be a little (just a little mind) more light on her face.

I like the 2nd better than the first - however the candles destroy the picture. Back lighting must be hell - perhaps try shooting various steps using RAW and convert from there.

Blending via PS is a good idea - dodging and burning might help.

Nonetheless - excellent attempt and keep the idea going.

Steve

Thanks for the tips...