Pics of my girl at the park today

It's been awhile since i had used my nifty-fifty (or thrifty-fifty however you call it ) so i thought i would take it along. I was also trying to get familiar with my flash and thought today would be a good day to practice some fill flash. I know that the time of the day wouldn't be perfect for portrait style shots but i tried my best. Little to no PP please C&C i want to learn!
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good picture, attractive girl

Nice pictures. There are a couple that stand out. On a couple of the others, be careful of uneven lighting on the face. Well, there's modeling lighting which gives dimension to the face and then there's just lighting which isn't really very flattering.

Thanks ffnt and dbernard for the comments.

I really like the close up head shots, it shows more detail and is eye catching. I think you did great with the lighting.

You have several very nice shots mike. I deleted four images due to images posting rules. please review IMAGE POSTING RULES,https://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthre​ad.php?t=51022

Ooops my bad, thanks for the comment MrWillis and Kevin

THe second shot is wonderful! Great work

Thanks incendy