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Sep 18, 2006 13:05 |  #1

1st post.. Critique please :)

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Ill upload a few more in a min

also tips and tricks with lighting?

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Sep 18, 2006 13:08 |  #2

nice , but i would like to see an eye either well lit or not covered in hair , the hair also creates a shadow. more light from the right might solve it.


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Sep 18, 2006 13:11 |  #3

Nice model. Good composition. I agree with free about the light and hair. Also seems to be a bit off focus.

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Sep 18, 2006 13:16 |  #4

added a photo.


and yea I agree about the focus. I wasn't using a tripod or anything.

On low lighting w/o flash should I use MF?


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Sep 18, 2006 13:21 |  #5

fivestardc5... What kind of lighting did you use on the model? MF would help but seems like the she was moving too fast for your shutter speed. You might want to boost up the ISO or open up your aperture to capture a sharper image. Try 1/125 or shorter exposure.




  
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Sep 18, 2006 13:39 |  #6

i used a lamp. :D.

Thanks for the tips... I'll try again tonight.

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Sep 18, 2006 16:05 |  #7
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Not to bad at all. Your girl looks to be very photogenic. Take advantage of it and keep snapping away.


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Sep 18, 2006 17:38 |  #8

Nice photos thanks for sharing


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