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Katie! Senior Portraits (Continued)

 
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Sep 21, 2006 21:51 |  #1

A few of you may have stumbled accross my post on sunday, and seen the first image of the series. I told yall there'd be more to come, and here they are!! I deliver them tomorrow, and I'm sure she's going to be very pleased. :-)

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Sep 21, 2006 21:52 |  #2

I absolutely love the second one!


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Sep 21, 2006 22:17 as a reply to  @ incendy's post |  #3
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I like shot number two also. I think you might have been going for some high contrast drama in 4&5. While, for my personal taste, 4 is okay, I think 5 needs to be balanced out a little. I was really drawn to the hot spot on her right cheek. The shadow play almost makes it look a tad bulbous.


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Sep 21, 2006 22:32 |  #4

Certainly a very pretty girl. I'd get her out of the direct sun though for a softer, more flattering light.




  
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Sep 21, 2006 23:11 |  #5

yep i have to concur 2nd one is really nice


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Sep 22, 2006 01:00 |  #6

Nice, good poses, pretty lady. I think you are right at or just over the line exposure wise.


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Sep 22, 2006 01:10 |  #7

love to see these in living color! Well done. Tad blown for my tastes, but really beautiful!


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Sep 22, 2006 01:18 |  #8

The eyes are wow, nice work


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Sep 22, 2006 05:49 |  #9

Her eyes are amazing. I really like number four.


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Sep 22, 2006 09:51 |  #10

My only problem with these is you can really see her makeup caked on... I'd suggest using the healing brush a little...


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Sep 22, 2006 13:40 |  #11

Number 2 is excelent, 4 is a close second.

Also I agree with others, skin texture is a little distracting.
I think it would look better with a little blur.
Meaning try duplicating the level and apply gausean blur to it. Then put the original level on top of that and start erasing the origninal to let the blurred one show through.

Aslo these are all portraints. and are very simial .. I don't know if that is your intention. But it seems like the picture you're trying to take is not just for the main portraights of all the seniors. Correct?


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Sep 22, 2006 14:15 |  #12

beautiful eyes. I like pic #4 but all are nice


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Sep 22, 2006 14:37 |  #13

this girls eyes are sooooo dreamy, i bet she gets away with murder with her dad, good shots and although she looks slightly uncomfortable in the first it is my favourite as clarity is bob on. they should be pleased i think


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Sep 22, 2006 17:54 |  #14

such a gorgeous woman.

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