These are from a series of Senior pics I did for a client. Please C&C...
hawkfeather Member 221 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2006 Location: North Central PA More info | Sep 23, 2006 20:21 | #1 These are from a series of Senior pics I did for a client. Please C&C... www.adkinsphotography.com
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DanteKing "Cream of Corn" BurgerMeister 9,134 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: San Anselmo, California More info | Sep 23, 2006 20:22 | #2 Image looks soft, OOF Dante
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Lin-z Goldmember 1,247 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: GA More info | Sep 23, 2006 21:02 | #3 It would do a little bit of sharping to this time and that would probably make it pop more, otherwise nice job. This hair blends in with the bg a little but its not bad.
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DanteKing "Cream of Corn" BurgerMeister 9,134 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: San Anselmo, California More info | Sep 23, 2006 23:43 | #4 Like the second better. I agree with the BG comment from Lindsi. Different color would pop the subject. Dante
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jaymrobinson Senior Member 718 posts Joined May 2006 Location: Japan, Present Day More info | Sep 23, 2006 23:52 | #5 A little unsharp mask and curves adjustment might help. I would also frame a little bit further down the torso, perhaps, including the whole collar. Good composition on the 2nd pic. KissDigital N (350D), EF-S 17-55 2.8 IS, EF 70-200 4L IS, Tamron 18-200 DiII, EF 50 1.8, EF 85 1.8, Tamron 90 Di Macro, 580EX, 430EX, ST-E2
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Servo'd Senior Member 337 posts Joined Aug 2006 More info | Sep 24, 2006 00:03 | #6 second is better, but try to get the bottom of the frame to be filled with him, no space to the side of his shoulder or body [Canon EOS 5D] [Canon EOS 350D] | Canon 50mm f/1.8 | Tamron 24-70mm f/2.8 | Front lens cap | Rear lens cap | Manfrotto Camera bag| B+W 67mm filter | Box for filter | B+W warranty| Shutter cap | Box for 50mm | Box for 350D | Canon EOS neckstrap | 350D Manual | 350D Warranty | CD w/ Drivers | Bubble wrap | CF card case | Battery charger | USB transfer wire | Power cable
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incendy Goldmember 2,118 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: Orange County More info | Sep 24, 2006 00:06 | #7 The way the hair meets the background looks kind of strange, but other than that I like them! Canon 5d with 35mm 1.4L, 24-70mm 2.8L and 135mm 2.0L
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