Just a couple of shots of my son, please let me know what you think and how i could improve... 
Nzshrimper a good height for ... 10,173 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: Christchurch - New Zealand More info | Sep 23, 2006 23:15 | #1 Just a couple of shots of my son, please let me know what you think and how i could improve... © All rights given away
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jaymrobinson Senior Member 718 posts Joined May 2006 Location: Japan, Present Day More info | Sep 23, 2006 23:35 | #2 In the first shot, there is a pole or something coming out of his head. It's best to avoid things like that in the background when possible. KissDigital N (350D), EF-S 17-55 2.8 IS, EF 70-200 4L IS, Tamron 18-200 DiII, EF 50 1.8, EF 85 1.8, Tamron 90 Di Macro, 580EX, 430EX, ST-E2
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Nzshrimper THREAD STARTER a good height for ... 10,173 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: Christchurch - New Zealand More info | Sep 23, 2006 23:38 | #3 jaymrobinson wrote in post #2028536 In the first shot, there is a pole or something coming out of his head. It's best to avoid things like that in the background when possible. The second picture seems just a tad overexposed. Also, you should think about whether you want to show the background or not. In this case the background is not very interesting. Since you have the 70-200 2.8, back up, zoom up near 200, open up the aperture to really get some nice bokeh and separate the subject from the bland background. That's a great lens, wish I had one. Keep working at it and I'm sure you're going to make some great images. ![]() thanks the pole is the door frame.. hmm i might PS that out.. and thanks for tips on the second shot.. © All rights given away
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Kristy Cream of the Crop 10,583 posts Gallery: 31 photos Best ofs: 1 Likes: 77 Joined Sep 2005 Location: A dream world where nothing is what it seems. More info | Sep 24, 2006 01:19 | #4 I love playing with photos so I did a quick edit on the first photo to see what would come of it.. Basically it's an adjustment of levels, and a gaussian blur layer that I erased his little face to keep it sharp but blur the background a bit more.. bumped up contrast & brightness a bit also. Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take,but by the moments that take our breath away.
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incendy Goldmember 2,118 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: Orange County More info | Sep 24, 2006 01:22 | #5 The pictures are so cute! The only thing I woudl recomend is that you think about your composition more and work on framing the shots! Have fun! Canon 5d with 35mm 1.4L, 24-70mm 2.8L and 135mm 2.0L
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