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Sep 30, 2006 08:30 |  #1

Let me know what you think about this picture I took recently.

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Sep 30, 2006 08:49 |  #2

hi, its nice , but a touch dark on my monitor, some more details in the eyes which hold her happiness and your in business ?


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Sep 30, 2006 08:56 |  #3

i REALLY like this shot!


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Sep 30, 2006 08:57 |  #4

freefallu wrote in post #2056961 (external link)
hi, its nice , but a touch dark on my monitor, some more details in the eyes which hold her happiness and your in business ?

Thanks for the comments. How's this?

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Sep 30, 2006 09:17 as a reply to  @ jaymrobinson's post |  #5

You have captured her emotion very well. I can't tell if she is crying or laughing. That is what I like about this picture. It keeps me wondering. And I don't think I want to know the answer because it might ruin it for me:) BTW, the second is better.

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Sep 30, 2006 10:44 |  #6

sweet :)


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Sep 30, 2006 15:04 |  #7

Cool shot. I would probably push the curves a bit to enphasize the lines in her skin.
Re. your edit- As we look at her, her left eye looks good now but, the right eye doesn`t look quite right to me. The little bit of white you put into the left hand corner should go! Just my opinion though!


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Sep 30, 2006 17:16 |  #8

Art Rodriguez wrote in post #2057028 (external link)
You have captured her emotion very well. I can't tell if she is crying or laughing. That is what I like about this picture. It keeps me wondering. And I don't think I want to know the answer because it might ruin it for me:) BTW, the second is better.

Great job!

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Sep 30, 2006 21:22 |  #9

The second edit is better. Like the others I love the emotion in this shot. I shows through in her eyes.


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Sep 30, 2006 21:26 |  #10

I really like this...it looks underexposed, but it's a wonderful capture!


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Oct 01, 2006 00:04 |  #11

Adding the 'eye' light makes it look better. The hand over the mouth is classic for Asian culture. Great shot.




  
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