I did my first paid portraits yesterday

The pictures are for something to do with the PA pagent.

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i like the photo's!

Just not her tops! with a tiara she should have a ballgown on or something! but thats not your fault!!

I think that the pictures had to be casusal but still wear the tiara so she had too

I like the first one the best. The second isn't very flattering to the model and the yellow shirt doesn't help.

I am just a amateur. But I think those look very flat. They taught at school that shadows make a portrait which seem to be absent.
Anyway just my views.

The first one is the best. I would whiten her teeth a little. The second one does not flatter her at all.

Thanks for the comments. She contacted me and she thought the pics were "GREAT" so i geuss thats the main thing that she liked them, but i will buy a book to guide me for posing and i will try to learn more before i do another shoot.