Photos: Jacqueline

3 from a recent shoot, a little different than my normal.

I REALLY like these pictures

Cant decide which i like the best!

Maybe 2!

I really like the b&w, the model is good, nice shots. #2 is my favorite.

I love these pics! they are pretty sweet. I like the composition and I am definitely diggin the B&W conversion you did.

Loce the photos...just watch your horizon...its tilted a bit which is especially noticable in the fountain photo...

cheers,

Great shots

They are good I really do like them, the 1st photo the most.

I really like the fountain shot. The building in the centre of the first shot caught my eye and looks very unnatural, it spoiled that one for me. Very distintive style though.

Fantastic shots - and B&W conversions.
I like the more candid appearance in the second and third photo.
The building behind the model in the first seems a bit distracting to me.

Nice!!!! Did you shoot in Raw? What lens did you use?

Wow awesome shots, how did you do your conversions?

Great shots, no 3 is my fav.

Really nice, for a Nikon

I'm sorry to introduce a sour note here, but I think that they all 'just' miss.

As you've titled the series 'Jacqueline' then the presumption is that they are intended as portraits. If that is the case none of them give the model sufficient emphasis.

If they are intended to go towards her portfolio as a model then that is closer but they still don't quite give enough emphasis to the clothes or her presentation of them. She does have potential in that direction with a little more help in her posture, not quite relaxed enough to make the viewer comfortable or not sufficiently taut to make you sit up and take notice.

Technically interesting, black and white reminiscent of the gritty realism school of a few years ago. Don't worry too much about rules if you want tilting horizontals then use them.

Having said all that, it is the start of a very worthwhile idea that is definitely worth pursuing.

I like #3... #1 I'd crop out the white bulge in her shirt in front of her belly, I think it makes the pose look a little awkward and it'd be more flattering without... I definitely like the idea in #3.