what do you think?

Flash seem harsh, but most of the time its hard to avoid.

Very nice work!!!

Its a good shot. It looks like you can see red-eye a bit.

I agree w/ the flash issue, but it probably couldn't have been avoided.

I'm no designer, but I think the shirt is too big & puffy. Or, is that a look or fashion thing? Very nice looking couple, though.

J.Simonian

I like the harsh flash on this one! I think it looks fantastic

Was the background edited out? I see some really soft edges on his pants.

Yes, it was I wanted to see how it would look. We were at a roof , the sky was black but I didn't like the fence behind them

Yes flash is definately too hot. and we can barely see the girls black shirt against the background, and I'm on CRT.

She's definately very attractive, and you could certainly take a better picture of her, and a bounced or diffused flash.

The flash is a little hot. I think it works for him but not her. Her face looks blown out.

His shirt is probably supposed to be like that. It fits in his shoulders.

The background doesn't bother me.

A nice capture but a bit too hot. She is a classic beauty IMO, shoot some more. Her face seems to be much lighter than his and his appears to be exposed properly.