Some pictures I took at a photo job part 2

Any comments / etc would be appreciated, negative or positive.

This is another site that I did, more basketball shots and a group shot here.

http://flickr.com/phot​os/duconihilum/2658541​78/

I'm not too good at c&c, just my opinions. I like your last three pictures. You really caught people looking unposed and natural expressions on their faces. Some of the basketball pictures have a little too much sky(#3); I'd like to see the kids legs instead(#4). Like I said, just my opinion. Others may not agree with me.

I agree with Saralonde. The last three pictures I like, the basketball pictures all have body parts cut off.

I think #6 is a bit to yellow, try adjusting the whitebalance. I do like the composition.
Try shooting the basketball pictures with less depth of field so the background is blurred

Olga

I like the outside pictures. They have good energy. I agree about the cut off body parts but didn't notice until I read the other post.

WB is way off in the pictures taken inside.

the last 3 indoor shots look yellow

odvdveer wrote in post #2106660
I think #6 is a bit to yellow, try adjusting the whitebalance. I do like the composition.
Try shooting the basketball pictures with less depth of field so the background is blurred

Olga

Thanks for the tips everyone

And that is about as shallow DOF I could get, still using the KIT lens... Meh.