I did a shoot with my housemate and his girlfriend, and these are what I managed to produce. Hope you enjoy and any comments/critiques welcome.
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woodsie Senior Member 701 posts Likes: 6 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Australian living in Zurich, Switzerland More info | Oct 12, 2006 16:26 | #1 I did a shoot with my housemate and his girlfriend, and these are what I managed to produce. Hope you enjoy and any comments/critiques welcome. 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 1DMkIIn, 20D and S80 - Full gear list
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jra Cream of the Crop 6,568 posts Likes: 35 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Ohio More info | Oct 12, 2006 16:29 | #2 Nice work...my only critique would be that I think she's blocking his face too much in the first pic.
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christyjo2 Goldmember 2,275 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Arkansas More info | Oct 12, 2006 16:30 | #3 Those are awesome! I like your ideas for posing them! Those are great..thanks for sharing! *Christy* "If at first you dont succeed...destroy all evidence that you tried." www.christyfullerphotography.info
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TeeWhy "Monkey's uncle" 10,596 posts Likes: 5 Joined Feb 2006 Location: Pasadena, CA More info | Oct 12, 2006 16:30 | #4 They pretty much look good in terms of composition, I'd increase the tonality of the b/w shots with a touch more contrast and make them duotone for a bit more texture/warmth to the shots. Gallery: http://tomyi.smugmug.com/
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Pandragon Senior Member 492 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Redmond, WA More info | Oct 12, 2006 18:48 | #5 I really like #4, that one is the best IMO. Canon 30D :: Canon EF 17-40mm f/4 L :: Canon EF 70 - 200mm f/4 L IS :: Canon 300mm F4 L IS :: Giottos Lava Tripod with Ballhead
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kpiela Goldmember 1,426 posts Joined Jun 2005 Location: Duluth GA More info | Oct 12, 2006 19:07 | #6 Ditto on 4... I really like that shot 5D Markii, 50D and 20D 70-200 f/2.8L, 50mm 1.2L Tokina 10-17, 200 f2.8, Canon 28-135mm 580ex
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hart Member 128 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Fort Wayne, IN More info | Oct 12, 2006 21:25 | #7 6 is my favorite. it's a great photo. 2 is nice as well. I like 4 but try lowering the sepia levels alittle. it may just be me though, but i think it would help. Canon 30D, Canon EOS 350D, 580EX Speedlites, 17-40mm f/4 L USM, 50mm f/1.8, Sigma 70-200mm f/2.8 EX, 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
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winkie Goldmember 1,067 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2006 Location: Fargo, ND More info | Oct 12, 2006 21:27 | #8 wonderful series... hard to choose a fav Canon EOS 7D Mark II • EOS 50D | Canon EF-S 15-85mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM • EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM • EF 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6L IS USM • EF 100mm f/2.8L Macro IS USM • EF 50mm f/1.4 USM
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justisnmnz Senior Member 774 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: Lake City, FL More info | Oct 12, 2006 22:21 | #9 some of them look slightly over-sharpened, but it actually works well. 20d | 50 f/1.8 | 70-200 f/4L | Sigma 10-20 f/4-5.6 EX
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KittyKat1982 Goldmember 1,108 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2006 More info | Oct 12, 2006 22:44 | #10 My favorite is #4. Good work -Renee
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DragonfliSpirit Goldmember 1,587 posts Joined Feb 2006 More info | Oct 12, 2006 22:57 | #11 |
COKECAN goofy name 1,069 posts Joined Feb 2005 Location: Yorktown, VA More info | Oct 12, 2006 22:57 | #12 I could have swore I responded to this thread already... Please, call me Steve.
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hart Member 128 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Fort Wayne, IN More info | Oct 13, 2006 01:44 | #13 I really like this shot, but the sepiatone was alittle too overpowering IMO.
I lowered the saturation by around 70%, made a 6% increase in the shadows, slightly raised the black level in the levels to compensate, burned the background @ 18% with a soft edge around the faces, and selectively burned and dodged areas on the subjects @ 15%. I'm new here so I hope it's ok to make a suggestion like this. Canon 30D, Canon EOS 350D, 580EX Speedlites, 17-40mm f/4 L USM, 50mm f/1.8, Sigma 70-200mm f/2.8 EX, 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
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Rumrunner Goldmember 1,865 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: El Paso, Texas More info | Oct 13, 2006 04:34 | #14 |
woodsie THREAD STARTER Senior Member 701 posts Likes: 6 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Australian living in Zurich, Switzerland More info | Wow, thirteen responses in such a short time. Thanks for the complements guys. 1DMkIIn, 20D and S80 - Full gear list
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