One of my better attempts so far, I'm interested in finding out what you think and how you'd improve it.
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MrBSnappy Senior Member 400 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Norfolk - UK More info | Oct 15, 2006 14:45 | #1 One of my better attempts so far, I'm interested in finding out what you think and how you'd improve it. HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. No matter how much you learn, there's always someone who knows more.
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Sp00ks Goldmember  1,654 posts Joined Apr 2006 Location: Raleigh, NC More info | Oct 15, 2006 16:58 | #2 I love the colors. I think the composition could be a little different. I'm trying to think of suggestions on composition......
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Elisabeth-Ann Goldmember  2,360 posts Joined Aug 2005 Location: Nassau, Bahamas More info | Oct 15, 2006 17:08 | #3 Great colours, I think it would be more interesting if you took the shot looking down towards the water along the breaker, rather than at it. Hope that made sense Twelve significant photographs in any one year is a good crop. -Ansel Adams
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Oct 15, 2006 17:54 | #4 Elisabeth-Ann wrote in post #2124226  Great colours, I think it would be more interesting if you took the shot looking down towards the water along the breaker, rather than at it. Hope that made sense  I can see what you mean, portrait format maybe. There'd be no boat in that though and I thought maybe that added a bit more interes.t No matter how much you learn, there's always someone who knows more.
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Oct 15, 2006 18:01 | #5 Sp00ks wrote in post #2124186 I love the colors. I think the composition could be a little different. I'm trying to think of suggestions on composition...... A couple of things. The sailboat is sailing out of the frame. The breaker wall is almost centered in the shot. Overall, I like the shot and thanks for sharing. If I'd been a bit quicker spotting the shot I could have got the boat sailing into the frame... Fortunately I'm the owner of two small children and this was quickly taken whilst trying to stop the youngest from eating the beach! Composing to get it sailing into the shot would have meant losing the sea on the shore and more sand. But again I do see what you mean. Thanks for the comments. No matter how much you learn, there's always someone who knows more.
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weemannie Goldmember 2,530 posts Joined Apr 2005 Location: Scottish Highlands More info | COmpositionally, its already been commented on. I like the colour of the breakwater very much. Regards, Trevor
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