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Oct 17, 2006 03:11 |  #1

Just back from a shoot today with lovely jaclyn these will be headshots and a few portfolio shots, cc welcomed as I have more than 30 to prepare for her agent, and would highly apreciate knowing what people think.
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Oct 17, 2006 05:46 |  #2

Hi Greg
I'm not sure about no 1 but No2 is beautiful, good looking model as well

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Oct 17, 2006 07:20 |  #3

thank u for the comment yeah have only edited 2 have many many more to do, shes very atractive in body mind and soul thats for sure.




  
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Oct 17, 2006 08:01 |  #4

2 is fantastic. The little creases between her eyebrows on 1 may need to be removed. She looks a little cross, or confused because of them.


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Oct 17, 2006 08:03 |  #5

No. 2 is very nice. I find her chin kind of merges with her neck in #1, not much definition between the two...


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Oct 17, 2006 08:05 |  #6

Number 2 make her eyes stand out and rightfully so, I think he creases and the tight crop on number 1 take away from her.


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Oct 17, 2006 08:41 |  #7

heres a couple more

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Oct 17, 2006 08:53 |  #8

Nice pics - although her complexion seems a little too smooth IMHO. Of the first two posted, unfortunately I can only see one of them.


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Oct 17, 2006 15:39 |  #9

no tampering with her complexion has occured at all her skins really like that.




  
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Oct 17, 2006 19:03 |  #10

She's a great subject, very pretty. I agree about the smoothness of the skin, maybe burn it a very small amount to give her tones some more depth. The pics are great, I'm not a fan of the greenish tone I'm seeing (unless that's my moniter)...also that last one is a great shot but the shirt/dress is a little frumpy on her right side, I would suggest trying to pull it in a little. Really nice stuff :)


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Oct 17, 2006 19:18 |  #11

StoopidGirl wrote in post #2133828 (external link)
She's a great subject, very pretty. I agree about the smoothness of the skin, maybe burn it a very small amount to give her tones some more depth. The pics are great, I'm not a fan of the greenish tone I'm seeing (unless that's my moniter)...also that last one is a great shot but the shirt/dress is a little frumpy on her right side, I would suggest trying to pull it in a little. Really nice stuff :)

cheers great tip ill give the burn a go




  
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Oct 17, 2006 19:31 |  #12

I have to do it sometimes because I have a bad habbit of blowing things out...hope it helps. It might take a few goes to get it right :) but if there's depth there to be grabbed it should work


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Oct 17, 2006 19:49 |  #13

her skin is so smooth so yeah it will be a challange.




  
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Oct 17, 2006 21:59 |  #14

Very nice


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Oct 18, 2006 21:53 |  #15

greg76 wrote in post #2134044 (external link)
her skin is so smooth so yeah it will be a challange.

I wish
I had that problem! hahahaha I've become a master at getting rid of zits and wrinkles!


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