newfly5 Senior Member  372 posts Joined Nov 2005 Location: kansas More info | Oct 18, 2006 21:19 | #1 Would love some c&c in any areas possible as I am just begining.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Ben
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bdj3 Senior Member  557 posts Joined May 2006 Location: SE PA More info | Oct 18, 2006 21:27 | #2 I like them but maybe alittle brighter? http://www.flickr.com/photos/lisapraul/
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RAitch Goldmember  2,917 posts Likes: 9 Joined Mar 2005 Location: Sarnia Ontario, Canada More info | Oct 18, 2006 21:29 | #3 I think the poses are alright... but they're really dark... and not in the way a low key normally is.
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Oct 18, 2006 21:29 | #4 In a image such as this , what would you recomend? Levels? Ben
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Oct 18, 2006 21:29 | #5 I will work on that as well, thank you Ben
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ashleymcnamara Goldmember  1,192 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: San Diego More info | Oct 18, 2006 22:11 | #6 I like them...I posted something similar last month and it got deleted... Cameras & Lenses
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DanteCaspian Goldmember 1,103 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2006 Location: Ottawa, ON Canada More info | Oct 18, 2006 22:17 | #7 Look good, but agree there needs to be more light.
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TravisF Goldmember 1,180 posts Likes: 1 Joined Nov 2005 Location: Michigan More info | Is it Ok if I post a rework to your original? You don't have that checked, so I thought I should ask. _______________
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Oct 18, 2006 23:05 | #9 pm for travis f, And yes that would be great. Thats one thing I need lots of help on is the PP. Ben
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Oct 18, 2006 23:30 | #10 This is a quick fix in levels. Its one of the very few tricks I know. Wheres that edit travis? Looking forward to it.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Ben
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bolantej Goldmember 3,780 posts Likes: 7 Joined Mar 2005 Location: CAlifornia More info | Oct 18, 2006 23:38 | #11 I think that level adjustment really helped. Great poses.
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Oct 18, 2006 23:44 | #12 Thank you for the feedback Bolantej Ben
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ABrownPhoto Goldmember  4,676 posts Likes: 4 Joined Sep 2006 Location: SoCaL More info | Oct 19, 2006 02:56 | #13 Nice poses and composition! I agreed with most about them needing to be slightly brighter... i see you've got it down! He still has one more move.
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TravisF Goldmember 1,180 posts Likes: 1 Joined Nov 2005 Location: Michigan More info | This was my, literally 5 second, attempt last night. All I did to lighten it was create a duplicate layer and change th blending mode to screen. I adjusted the opacity of the duplicate layer a little also.  Travis _______________
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MagicallyDelicious Goldmember 4,083 posts Likes: 2 Joined May 2006 Location: Southport UK More info | Oct 19, 2006 08:22 | #15 great shots but i think the adjusted levels really helps every mistake is a lesson learned
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