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Oct 24, 2006 13:33 |  #1

This is Jo who came to my studios last week, let me know what you think

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Let me know what you think good constructive criticism if required is always welcome

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Oct 24, 2006 15:06 |  #2

Nice photos, lovely model.

The only criticism that I could offer is maybe whiten the teeth and clone out a few stray hairs on the first two shots?


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Oct 24, 2006 15:13 |  #3

agree with above. 1st picture has distracting "strays" on left side.
The 3rd picture has a great effect.
The 4th picture, Is it supposed to be b/w or is it tinted blue? My monitor makes it look 2 blue but maybe that was the effect you were after.


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Oct 24, 2006 15:48 as a reply to  @ Pyropeck's post |  #4

Thanks guys, I will sort out the stray hairs, not sure about the blue though, was aiming for black and white with a tint of blue, not blue overkill. Have another shot with the guitar Id like to post but not sure where people portraits become glamour. Dont want to offend with a see thru top

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Oct 24, 2006 15:52 |  #5

The last photo looks slightly cool... Not so much black and white I'd say as "toned." Looks good to me, though.

I don't think a sheer top would be offensive. Could always post under "Glamour/nude."


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Oct 24, 2006 15:59 |  #6

needs a few more posts for the g/n.

I didn't mean it was overkill btw.


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Oct 24, 2006 16:02 as a reply to  @ Pyropeck's post |  #7

would happily post work in GN but I have nowhere near enough posts to be able too. I dont shoot too much glamour, and really enjoy quality headshots, but hey if the job comes along......


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Oct 24, 2006 16:06 |  #8

Ahh right, the post count... You could post a link (with a warning perhaps) and not the actual photo itself.


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Oct 24, 2006 16:09 as a reply to  @ Dave Page's post |  #9

Ok ... here goes: Pose #1 & 2 ... flat lighting ... up the ratio a good bit . Also she has hi-key clothes ... on a low key background.

Pose #3 There is no light in her eyes, so they look sunken

Pose #4 way too bright and again flat lighting

All would have been better with a 3:1 or 4:1 ratio.

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Oct 24, 2006 16:39 as a reply to  @ D. Craig Flory's post |  #10

Thanks thats all good comment....


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