Took this of my niece at a local waterfall, C&C please, did I get it right 
calicokat Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 27, 2006 01:18 | #1 Took this of my niece at a local waterfall, C&C please, did I get it right "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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Dooglla Goldmember 1,582 posts Joined Mar 2004 Location: Sweden More info | Oct 27, 2006 02:29 | #2 Calicokat...for now I can only see...Maintenance in Progress ---------------
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calicokat THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 27, 2006 02:30 | #3 Dooglla wrote in post #2175938 Calicokat...for now I can only see...Maintenance in Progress Yeah, I know, smugmug just went into service mode "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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D.CraigFlory Goldmember 1,333 posts Joined Sep 2006 More info | It is a very cute portrait. My one suggestion ... right before you squeeze the shutter release .... squint at the scene and see what your eyes are drawn to. It is primarily tones in the blue family. Her belt bag is very noticeable. Otherwise it has great potential when worked in Photoshop. D. Craig Flory PPA Certified, Cr.Photog.,
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Kelsey-Lee Senior Member 732 posts Joined Oct 2006 More info | Oct 27, 2006 09:44 | #5 I don't know, but my focus is drawn to the waterfall... maybe blur the background a little bit in photoshop? Other than that, it's a nice shot.
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ayotnoms Perfect Anti-Cloning Argument 2,988 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: San Francisco Bay Area More info | Oct 27, 2006 11:22 | #6 I wouldn't sweat the details--as noted above--too much. Steve
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DanteKing "Cream of Corn" BurgerMeister 9,134 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: San Anselmo, California More info | Oct 27, 2006 11:28 | #7 calicokat wrote in post #2175768 Took this of my niece at a local waterfall, C&C please, did I get it right ![]() ![]() man you never get anything right!!! perfect time for tone mapping to regain those blown highlights!
Dante
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PhotoScout Senior Member 887 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: California More info | Oct 27, 2006 15:19 | #8 I like the two subjects in the image for the comp. I'm drawn to the water fall then to the model. It shows a beautiful place and a person who is there too. The small carry bag emphasizes the person hiked to the falls. 5D * 20D * XHA1S * HF11
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calicokat THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 27, 2006 17:27 | #9 D. Craig Flory wrote in post #2177029 It is a very cute portrait. My one suggestion ... right before you squeeze the shutter release .... squint at the scene and see what your eyes are drawn to. It is primarily tones in the blue family. Her belt bag is very noticeable. Otherwise it has great potential when worked in Photoshop. Kelsey-Lee wrote in post #2177119 I don't know, but my focus is drawn to the waterfall... maybe blur the background a little bit in photoshop? Other than that, it's a nice shot. ![]() I do not like photoshop though "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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calicokat THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 27, 2006 17:28 | #10 ayotnoms wrote in post #2177473 I wouldn't sweat the details--as noted above--too much. It is what it is. ...and what it is, is a very nice photograph. ![]() PhotoScout wrote in post #2178501 I like the two subjects in the image for the comp. I'm drawn to the water fall then to the model. It shows a beautiful place and a person who is there too. The small carry bag emphasizes the person hiked to the falls. Makes me want to go there too. Thank you both for your comments, I am glad someone liked it "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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calicokat THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 27, 2006 17:28 | #11 Dante King wrote in post #2177501 man you never get anything right!!! perfect time for tone mapping to regain those blown highlights! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
Lets see it "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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DanteKing "Cream of Corn" BurgerMeister 9,134 posts Joined Jan 2005 Location: San Anselmo, California More info | Oct 27, 2006 18:37 | #12 |
calicokat THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 28, 2006 08:43 | #13 Dante King wrote in post #2179361 look! I see the new version, it has alot less pop to it, especially her, she does not look that pale normally "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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Hellashot Goldmember 4,617 posts Likes: 2 Joined Sep 2004 Location: USA More info | Oct 28, 2006 11:49 | #14 Permanent banDante King wrote in post #2177501 man you never get anything right!!! perfect time for tone mapping to regain those blown highlights! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
If a normal person saw the original image, they would find nothing wrong with the picture. I don't think your edits are really necessary. 5D, Drebel, EOS-3, K1000
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calicokat THREAD STARTER Cream of the Crop 14,720 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2005 Location: Southern California More info | Oct 28, 2006 17:46 | #15 Well, I like the shot, so does my niece, so all is well "You are going to fall off a cliff trying to get a better shot someday"- My hopeful and loving wife
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