ashleymcnamara Goldmember  1,192 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: San Diego More info | Oct 29, 2006 21:50 | #1 OK so I have spent the better part of my evening post processing and here is what I have come up with....these are the before and after shots...are the eyes too bright? is the skin too yellow? If I have to ask then the answer may very well be yes but...I need a second set if eyes.   Before   Before   And Yes, I am working on a calibrated monitor.  Cameras & Lenses
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Oct 29, 2006 21:56 | #2 hummmm the last one may be a little dark... Cameras & Lenses
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NewbieXT Goldmember 1,564 posts Joined Mar 2006 More info | Oct 29, 2006 21:59 | #3 Yes on both counts. The skin doesn't look right especially in the first and 3rd. Not as bad in second but still off. when whitening the eyes it is really easy to go too far and make them look freaky, not working in these. Maybe this workflow video would help.
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NewbieXT Goldmember 1,564 posts Joined Mar 2006 More info | Oct 29, 2006 22:02 | #4 Oh hey by the way, the second and third work if you're going for artistic. They kinda have a Norman Rockwell/Coca-Cola thing going. Might be something to work on.
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Oct 29, 2006 22:06 | #5 NewbieXT wrote in post #2188250  Oh hey by the way, the second and third work if you're going for artistic. They kinda have a Norman Rockwell/Coca-Cola thing going. Might be something to work on. You know whats funny is that I WAS sort of going for that look. I want it to be bright but not toooo unnatural. You know what I mean? Cameras & Lenses
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Oct 29, 2006 22:21 | #6 Better?  Cameras & Lenses
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ABrownPhoto Goldmember  4,676 posts Likes: 4 Joined Sep 2006 Location: SoCaL More info | Oct 29, 2006 22:21 | #7 i like the drool! He still has one more move.
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Oct 29, 2006 22:24 | #8 I do too but her mom wants me to remove it Cameras & Lenses
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verty Goldmember  1,459 posts Likes: 1 Joined Nov 2005 Location: London, United Kingdom More info | Oct 29, 2006 22:27 | #9 ok.. 5D Mark II || 550 D || 350 D || Canon 17-40L || Canon 24-70L || Canon 50 1.4 || Canon 70-200L IS 2.8 || 580 EX Speedlight || 480 EX speedlight x2 || Manfrotto 190CXPro3 + 488 RC2 || Cybersyncs
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Kelsey-Lee Senior Member  732 posts Joined Oct 2006 More info | Oct 30, 2006 00:12 | #10 I don't really like the PP pn any of the after shots. Sorry, but that's me. Nice try though: practice is the key!
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Bookmarks Member 60 posts Joined Oct 2005 More info | I sort of like the retro Coca-Cola poster look if that's what you're after. You have recreated the soft focus and aged coloration of a 50's ad.
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NewbieXT Goldmember 1,564 posts Joined Mar 2006 More info | Oct 30, 2006 06:15 | #12 This definately has the look good job.
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fraggles Member  104 posts Joined Sep 2006 Location: australia More info | Oct 30, 2006 06:24 | #13 there all very good well done
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PIXI_666 Goldmember  2,005 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: Perth, WA, Australia More info | Oct 30, 2006 06:33 | #14 looks too much like a doll in the afters kinda scary looking...but the befores are good, just remember to keep box's of tissues handy, i go through at least 2 box's of tissues a day with photographing kids in the studio...those dribbles - it just isnt a great look lol "Capturing, Creating & Preserving your memories"
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amonline Goldmember  3,558 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2006 More info | Oct 30, 2006 07:00 | #15 Sorry... I guess I'm the only one that thinks these are wayyyy too yellow?
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The originals look much better; although, they still need a little 'pop'. Great job on the shoot though!