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Temple of Virgins and a View from Scout Lookout, Zion NP

 
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Nov 01, 2006 08:20 |  #1

The Temple of Virgins, Zion NP. The clouds were moving quickly and the lighting was changing rapidly while I was taking pictures from the museum observation spot. It was very pleasant to just watch the changing colors on the sandstone, not as dramatic as a sunrise/sunset but still worthwhile.

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This was a taken from the trail just above Scout Lookout, 5 handheld shots with a 28mm lens on the 5D stitched together.

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Nov 01, 2006 09:17 |  #2

I really like the one from the Lookout. I stop at the Museum alot and it is tough to get the lighting right for the "Temple", the clouds really make the picture.

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Nov 01, 2006 12:53 |  #3

The first shot is instantly stunning, but then as I looked more I feel like it could use a little hlp in PS. Maybe just a bit more contrast, but I think some light Shadow & Highlights followed by contrast. Beautiful shot, just the same.


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Nov 01, 2006 13:22 |  #4

Thanks for the comments. The first is a composite of two different exposures blended in PS, the clouds/sky were much brighter that the canyon walls. Beside the blending using a mask, it was PP'd with shadow/highlight (+contrast), curves, and hue/saturation. Because of the flat lighting, the original contrast wasn't very high. I'm still not sure about how much S/H to use, bring out the the shadows tends to flatten the rest and contrast does always bring it back.

I will try some additional PPing. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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Nov 01, 2006 14:01 |  #5

Sick pictures man! I really like them.

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Nov 01, 2006 16:14 |  #6

Very nice colours in the FG of the #1 but the mountain need a little boost in PP. Second shot is even better but again, needs a boost.




  
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Nov 01, 2006 18:35 |  #7

What and where is NP? Never heard of it. Looks very impressive!


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Nov 01, 2006 19:09 |  #8

montreal wrote in post #2202801 (external link)
What and where is NP? Never heard of it. Looks very impressive!

Sorry, NP is National Park. I'm a typical American that thinks everyone would know that :oops: . Zion National Park is located southern Utah. The town of Springdale is next to the park.

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Nov 01, 2006 19:21 |  #9

I would increase the contrast in #1, especially in the mountains in the back. Otherwise I like it a lot, good composition. The second one could benefit from a tad more contrast, but it looks really harsh and isnt as niec as the first shot.


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Nov 01, 2006 19:41 |  #10

A little bit of tweaks....

Shadow & Highlights
- Shadows 10/30/30
- Highlights 10/30/30
- Color Correct +100
- Midtone Contrast +10 (The "secret" to not losing contrast with S&H - but it doesn't always work)

Then a smidgeon of sharpening...

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- Amount 50%
- Radius 0.2
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--- Fade 0%
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--- Fade 100%
--- Tonal Width 100
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It's not dramatic, but punches the clouds and ridge a bit. The slight sharpening helps the bushes in the foreground.

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Nov 01, 2006 19:57 as a reply to  @ Scottes's post |  #11

Thanks for the comments, I need to be pushed a bit. I tend to like the color to be a be muted and sometimes don't go far enough. C&C on thiese is encouraged.

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Thanks Scott, I just finished this when you posted. I may have gone a bit too far the other way.

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Nov 01, 2006 20:16 |  #12

jdkeck wrote in post #2202928 (external link)
Sorry, NP is National Park. I'm a typical American that thinks everyone would know that :oops: .

Oops :oops: I should have thought of that :) I thought Zion was a city and NP a state, but I couldn't remember of a state that had those initials ;)

Great pics. And I like the edit on the first one.


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Nov 01, 2006 20:19 |  #13

jdkeck wrote in post #2203140 (external link)
I tend to like the color to be a be muted and sometimes don't go far enough. ... I may have gone a bit too far the other way.

It's all very subjective, and a matter of taste. And you are the photographer!


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Nov 01, 2006 20:34 |  #14

More great shots, Jeff, in all the variations.


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Nov 01, 2006 20:45 |  #15

Scottes wrote in post #2203206 (external link)
It's all very subjective, and a matter of taste. And you are the photographer!

Yes, but constructive comments can expand boundaries. Sometimes I will try something new or different because of suggestions and I have always learned from the suggestion. I may not care for the change, but I have learned new PS PP skills. I have learned a lot from posting photos on POTN.

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