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Nov 05, 2006 22:47 |  #1

Wife posed for me tonight. Thought this one turned out pretty good. Some post processing. Was playing around with flash, let me know what you think please. You guys are just about my only help for improving. Think i need to start a local club or something.:D




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Nov 06, 2006 01:08 |  #2

there seem to be some red casting on there.
try to adjust the WB and also maybe a little more contrast ?
sharpness seem to be fine.
good luck


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Nov 06, 2006 02:21 |  #3

I find the hand a major distraction sorry. It is at a weird angle and draws my eye away from your wifes face. Definately try a little WB and contrats as suggested.
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Nov 06, 2006 04:12 |  #4

A good point to remember is most women will not thank you for taking their photo at an angle from below.. Always take from at least just above.


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Nov 06, 2006 06:33 as a reply to  @ debiharry's post |  #5

I agree about not liking the low angle. I also agree about the hand being posed very badly. In addition, it's under-exposed and the ratio is too low. And, there are no spectral highlights so the light source is too soft. Finally, the lights in the room were too low and so her eyes are too big.

I like one thing ... good catch lights in her eyes.


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Nov 06, 2006 12:45 |  #6

Wow sounds like i've got lots to learn. Well that's why i'm here.




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