Sunrise over Dublin Bay a few weeks ago. C&C, and tips on how to improve please.
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marcdpalmer Member 117 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: Dublin, Ireland More info | Nov 07, 2006 15:37 | #1 Sunrise over Dublin Bay a few weeks ago. C&C, and tips on how to improve please. Keeping me sane, an island of decency in a sea of turds...
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adebass Senior Member 873 posts Joined Mar 2005 Location: Glasgow, Scotland More info | Nov 07, 2006 15:47 | #2 I like it. The composition is actually quite nice. Maybe the power station is a wee bit to central, but its a minor point. It does seem the foreground is a touch OOF though, what aperature did you use for the shot? Dr Adrian Bass (www.adrian-bass.fotopic.net
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Nov 07, 2006 15:56 | #3 Thanks Adrian, I took it a few weeks ago with an old canon point and shoot, so not a clue what aperature I used. Its just down the road, so I go there most mornings with the 20D to try capture again. So far I haven't managed though. Ill post it when I do though. Keeping me sane, an island of decency in a sea of turds...
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rudgej Couch-potato photographer 5,613 posts Joined Jul 2005 More info | Nov 07, 2006 15:58 | #4 I agree with Adrian's two points about foreground sharpness and central placing of the buildings, but these are very insignificant bits of C&C as the photo has many lovely elements such as the foreground ripples, the reflections, the warm cast of the setting sun etc.
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adebass Senior Member 873 posts Joined Mar 2005 Location: Glasgow, Scotland More info | Nov 07, 2006 15:59 | #5 marcdpalmer wrote in post #2230963 Thanks Adrian, I took it a few weeks ago with an old canon point and shoot, so not a clue what aperature I used. Its just down the road, so I go there most mornings with the 20D to try capture again. So far I haven't managed though. Ill post it when I do though. Ill be looking forward to it Dr Adrian Bass (www.adrian-bass.fotopic.net
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rudgej Couch-potato photographer 5,613 posts Joined Jul 2005 More info | Nov 07, 2006 15:59 | #6 So Marc, are you dyslexic with your signature, i.e. it should read "I want stuff", or do you have it all and your "Stuff I want" list has been completed?
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adebass Senior Member 873 posts Joined Mar 2005 Location: Glasgow, Scotland More info | Nov 07, 2006 16:02 | #7 rudgej wrote in post #2230978 So Marc, are you dyslexic with your signature, i.e. it should read "I want stuff", or do you have it all and your "Stuff I want" list has been completed? ![]() Ok thats even confusing me. Say that again, im a biologist Dr Adrian Bass (www.adrian-bass.fotopic.net
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Nov 08, 2006 07:34 | #8 Ha ha ha. No, not dislexic. Stuff I want... means there is so much stuff I want, 5 lines definately wouldn't be enough.... Ill change it to "I want stuff", just to keep John happy... Keeping me sane, an island of decency in a sea of turds...
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Nov 08, 2006 08:09 | #9 Its a great picture, especially with a P&S. I don't like the power station though it would work better for me with it out of frame, it conflicts with the curves of the ripples in the sand, the soft clouds and the curve of the landscape. Colin
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rudgej Couch-potato photographer 5,613 posts Joined Jul 2005 More info | Nov 08, 2006 10:13 | #10 marcdpalmer wrote in post #2233969 ... Ill change it to "I want stuff", just to keep John happy...
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