Beautiful

yes she is...

agree on beauty. Too hot on her face however.

Beautiful girl...nice location too.

I've checked out your flickr.... the entire set is great!

This shot has some great lighting, but a little bright on the face for my taste (as mentioned by the KING!!)

Beautiful indeed...Agreed about the hot face (in more then one meaning of hot). Also a flare on the left. But great shot overall.

I don't much care for the bra showing through the shirt. Sometimes this sort of thing isn't visible but the flash brings it out.

Otherwise, I like it!

It's very very nice it really is... but I have to agree, the lighting is a tad harsh... maybe the shadow from the nose is to pronounced. I bet a little dodge and burn could fix it.

Yes she is!!

Yep!

(so is the shot btw, well done)

And if we're looking....it looks like her toes are coming off of her shoes....like they're either too big or small...I'm not sure which. I know...don't sweat the small stuff right?! But she is beautiful

haha didn't notice that..

thanks for the comments.

i really like the idea, and the execution for the most part. the only mods I would perhaps make is to lower the lighting by an 1/8th of a stop and then perhaps add a fill at 1/32nd. Or perhaps just a refelctor on your left side to soften the edge line on her pants and bring her arm out of the shadow. But it is a cool location and a very nice subject to work with. Congrats.

Dante King wrote in post #2241628
agree on beauty. Too hot on her face however.

Hard to tell on her face, but there are blown/clipped highlights on the bridge behind her which I find quite distracting and dissapointing. Watch your histogram/image review for signs of blown/clipped highlights.