Hello everyone
Afew shots from today. Cut myself on barb wire climbing over a fence and steped in about 20 cow craps 
I would like some C&C Please
Stavhp Goldmember  2,303 posts Joined May 2006 Location: UK More info | Nov 28, 2006 18:42 | #1 Hello everyone Canon 7D, sigma 17-70, Canon 50mm F1.8, Canon 70-300mm IS
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Nov 29, 2006 01:52 | #2 nothing? Canon 7D, sigma 17-70, Canon 50mm F1.8, Canon 70-300mm IS
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michaelbehlen Senior Member 352 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: Fresno, Ca More info | Nov 29, 2006 02:01 | #3 Hey Stavhp, what did your post production include? Your first image looks like your color adjustments added to much magenta/red to the trees and fence. I like the second image the cool blues and the nice greens make the image nhice to look at. Your thid also has a tonal problem, trees arnt suppose to be red. Do you shoot in RAW or in jpg? If jpg, consider shooting in RAW and setting your white balence through the computer using programs like Adobe Lightroom. Michael Behlen
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Lesmac Goldmember  1,829 posts Likes: 4 Joined Jun 2003 Location: Otley , Yorkshire, UK More info | Nov 29, 2006 03:37 | #4 I like the 3rd one, the sign anchors the image very well. I agree you need a slightly lighter touch with the contrast button  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Canon 1DS MKIII,7D, 85 1.2L, 24 F1.4L, 135 F2L, 200mm F2.8L,50mm F1.4, 120-300 F2.8, 12-24mm f 4.5
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EOSAddict Book Committee Immortal  6,091 posts Likes: 17 Joined Apr 2005 Location: Preston, Lancashire, England More info | Nov 29, 2006 04:22 | #5 Hey Stav, Al
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rssfhs Goldmember 2,707 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2003 Location: Oregon More info | Nov 29, 2006 07:29 | #6 The effect of the lights on the last shot is really cool! If I were you though, I would leave out that stone sign because I don't find it so interesting visually. Maybe it has personal meaning to you or whatever, but if you are trying to make a work of art, I think you need to keep things simple and to the point. Craig
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Dimitri_V Cream of the Crop  9,221 posts Joined Nov 2004 Location: Scotland More info | Nov 29, 2006 08:58 | #7  Permanent banLesmac wrote in post #2328118  I like the 3rd one, the sign anchors the image very well. I agree you need a slightly lighter touch with the contrast button  , and your images could do with sharpening a touch. The first two, from a composition point of view, I've indicated a couple of flasw, the first, the tree should be either in frame or out frame, not half in. Second, the swan is too near the edge of the image.Still. I like where you are going with these. you have a good eye for what works, I just think you need to fine tune your PP skills and you will be there. Regarding the fence and cow crap, 'no pain-no gain'  Best advice you could ever get,the only thing i have to add here,as Les said about your PP skils,watch out for these horizon bits with skies.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. My site
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Nov 29, 2006 10:17 | #8 cheers guys. Being i first time there i kinda rushed around nto thinking much about composition. Canon 7D, sigma 17-70, Canon 50mm F1.8, Canon 70-300mm IS
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Nov 29, 2006 13:11 | #9 Just tried something new for me. Any better?  Canon 7D, sigma 17-70, Canon 50mm F1.8, Canon 70-300mm IS
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Nov 29, 2006 18:04 | #10 no? Canon 7D, sigma 17-70, Canon 50mm F1.8, Canon 70-300mm IS
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rssfhs Goldmember 2,707 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2003 Location: Oregon More info | Nov 29, 2006 21:01 | #11 The tones are nice and the river leads well into the scene. I also like how the clouds look, but I must agree that the tree needs to either be in or out, not cut in half like that. Craig
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rssfhs Goldmember 2,707 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2003 Location: Oregon More info | Nov 29, 2006 21:07 | #12 Here's how I might have done it:  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Craig
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Gabbana Senior Member 301 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: Arizona More info | Nov 29, 2006 21:21 | #13 they said the tree must go
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AnthonyMcAvoy Senior Member  589 posts Joined Jun 2006 Location: adelaide, south australia More info | Nov 30, 2006 03:08 | #14  Hey Stavhp. I like this shot and thought about the possibilities of BW. I think the tones in the clouds come up nice. Anyway, thanks for sharing. 30D, 50D, Canon Macro 60mm f2.8, Canon 24-105mm F/4L, Canon 70-200mm F2.8L
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Nov 30, 2006 11:18 | #15 cheers for all the comments guys Canon 7D, sigma 17-70, Canon 50mm F1.8, Canon 70-300mm IS
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