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Dec 08, 2006 22:35 |  #1

I took these last weekend. It seems like they should have more spark than they do. Any suggestions on how I can improve them?

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Dec 08, 2006 22:37 |  #2

Did you use a CPL? And, do I know this place? Ankeny?


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Dec 08, 2006 23:04 |  #3

I hope you dont mind, but I made some minor changes that may or may have not helped (altered the horizon & cropped slightly, darkened the sky, slightly lightened the trees & reflection on the left, removed a few branches in the reflection and on the right side). Its a very tranquil scene and your shot is very good....it certainly didnt need me playing with it :D


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Dec 08, 2006 23:08 |  #4

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Did you use a CPL? And, do I know this place? Ankeny?

No, not Ankeny...Finley, this is on the Woodpecker trail. And yes I have a CPL. I think it's on in this shot, but I can't swear to it. I know I have some shots with it on.



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Dec 08, 2006 23:12 |  #5

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I hope you dont mind, but I made some minor changes that may or may have not helped (altered the horizon & cropped slightly, darkened the sky, slightly lightened the trees & reflection on the left, removed a few branches in the reflection and on the right side). Its a very tranquil scene and your shot is very good....it certainly didnt need me playing with it :D

Thanks for the comments and thanks for the edit. I like your edit and I certainly don't mind at all.

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Dec 08, 2006 23:17 |  #6

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No, not Ankeny...Finley, this is on the Woodpecker trail. And yes I have a CPL. I think it's on in this shot, but I can't swear to it. I know I have some shots with it on.

That's on Woodpecker Trail? Oh man, I've gotta go up there again. The shots are great on their own, but sometimes that Willamette fog base makes everything seem so desaturated. The CPL was the only non-PP advice I could think of....


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Dec 08, 2006 23:21 |  #7

This was my first trip there. I ran into to women just coming off the trail and they told me I just had to get up there and take some shots because the pond was absolutely still. Boy were they right! It was the really cold morning and there was absolutely no breeze whatsoever.



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This was my first trip there. I ran into to women just coming off the trail and they told me I just had to get up there and take some shots because the pond was absolutely still. Boy were they right! It was the really cold morning and there was absolutely no breeze whatsoever.

Hmmm... tomorrow's Saturday... could sneak off before chores.... hmmm...


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Dec 08, 2006 23:27 |  #9

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Hmmm... tomorrow's Saturday... could sneak off before chores.... hmmm...

LOL...just promise to get Perm a triple venti latte on the way home and she'll be fine!

...but it's supposed to rain tomorrow!



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LOL...just promise to get Perm a triple venti latte on the way home and she'll be fine!

...but it's supposed to rain tomorrow!

If I can pull off a quad venti, I'm set. Too bad about the rain. Guess I'll have to do chores... :cry:


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Dec 09, 2006 18:12 |  #12

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My five cents worth. Have tired eyes tonight so it may look odd when I look in the morning! Hope you don't mind.
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I don't mind at all. I actually really like it. What did you do?



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Dec 10, 2006 01:50 |  #13

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Dec 10, 2006 07:49 |  #15

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Wow perfection

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I love autumnal pics. The predominance of autumnal colour is normaly that lovely golden brown hue to non-evergreen foliage. Very simple to do. In the hue saturation dialogue in photoshop, first select 'greens' in the colour rollout, then select the eye dropper tool at the bottom. Click the dropper on a leafy area. Then click on the dropper with the '+' symbol and select some more greens that need the change. Then play with the hue and saturation sliders until you have the look you want. I adjusted to enhance the foliage and simulate a richer autumnal sun.
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Cool! I'm not that knowledgable of that kind of stuff. I can do some stuff in Photoshop, but the whole eyedropper business is not something I've messed with. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your technique!



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