Portrait

Thanks for the critique.
I myself am not totally satisfied with the shot. It's a lot better than the original after some work in PS. I think the main reason is that my daughter is not familiar with this kind of attire. After just s few minutes she stated that she will never marry a man, who insist on veils
Hope to find a local model to pose soon.

As for the multitude of colors: it's a traditional arabic face mask; nothing changed nothing added.

henkbos wrote:
Thanks for the critique.
I myself am not totally satisfied with the shot. It's a lot better than the original after some work in PS. I think the main reason is that my daughter is not familiar with this kind of attire. After just s few minutes she stated that she will never marry a man, who insist on veils
Hope to find a local model to pose soon.

As for the multitude of colors: it's a traditional arabic face mask; nothing changed nothing added.

Just out of curiosity... I'd be interested in what it is that YOU are not satisfied with.

1. the mask is not hers and it doesn't fit properly
2. the mask isn't straight
3. it was bothering her eyes and she had to pull it down all the time. Her eyes are not fully open
4. shadows under her eyes; will work on that in PS
5. skin showing at the top

It was my first portrait session though, so plenty of opportunity to improve once I get my hands on another model.