cuba dave

Would love any comments on this, im trying to move away from scareyness and into more commercial cooky photography! (trying) I know its blown, im go for more a contemporary stylised feel...?

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I think you accomplished the type of image you want to accomplish. It made me think... HUH?

Great color on this!!

Did you focus on the subject face? It seems a little, very small amount, a bit flat... I want the subject to POP a little...

Other than that, this is a great look and the color is very sharp!!

I wish my pics would come out as good as this....

Interesting shot. Interesting subject.

Many thanks for your responses, a great encouragement practice practice with those damn lights!

Ive decided to try and split myself into two as im sure many here have to..commercial me and arty on the side me

..its just trying to find time for both!


RiverCottage

Nice to see a post by you again! I always love your work.

The dark tones in this one run together on my monitor, it takes away from the image for me. It very well could be my monitor though, I still have not calibrated it.

If I hadn't ever seen your work I would say that the pose is a bit forced, the hand on the elbow part anyway. You have more creativity in your little finger than I have total though, so I won't say any more abotu your compositions

Welcome back if you were gone, if you weren't I'll be looking for your posts.