Duotone: How this pics looks. C/C welcomed

I used chanel mixer to desaturate, then grayscale, duotone. go back to RGB then aplied a level layer in overlay mode in order to get contrast.
Let me know how it looks for a full page Album (10x15). What would you do to improved it.

Thanks,

LuisE

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I like the tone, but the image feels too tight, and it's a bit tilted. She looks a little uncomfortable, her neck is tight. Also, maybe tone done the shiny-ness in her left cheek. Are those petals behind her? They're a bit distracting, but easy to clone out. Hope that helps!

I agree, a bit tight. I'd tame a few highlights and remove the leaves.

Thanks for the comments, very helpfull still some work there.

her dress is so beautiful. do you have another image with the full dress where the background isnt so busy and distracting. i would choose that over this. also if it were going in my book i would fix the shine on her face.

i wish my brides had dresses like that. show it off