sjafari Senior Member  507 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: Minneapolis, MN More info | Jan 21, 2007 18:09 | #1 I have never really liked the logo that was on my website, so i decided to try making a new one today. Im not sure if i like this one either, and i plan on changing the colors later-- different hue and so that the 'foto' is a different color from the 'jafari'. anyway, please let me know what you think!
possible new logo?
-Shehab-
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thekid24 pro-zack-lee  8,547 posts Likes: 7 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Oklahoma City,OK More info | Jan 21, 2007 18:19 | #2 To be honest, Im not fond of it. Its a little distracting. But I know how hard it is to come up with a logo, it can be frustrating at times. The only remedy is to just keep plugging at it and soon youll get to the point where you wont want to ask if its good or not, because you know it is
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Jan 21, 2007 18:22 | #3 its cool-- i dont really like it much as well! -Shehab-
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joegolf68 Goldmember 3,269 posts Likes: 1 Joined Nov 2005 Location: Sacramento CA area More info | Jan 21, 2007 18:28 | #4 I like the second one, but only the first part, up to the AFAxxx which I would leave out. I don't think there is a need to use the full words for a logo, initials are ok, and you did well with that. Nice artistic touch, but as I said, I would cut out everything after the "J". Gear List
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ifonline Senior Member  721 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: Braselton, Georgia More info | Jan 21, 2007 18:31 | #5 Interesting, but too distracting. I can't make it out, although maybe that in itself is unique enough to leave your mark, so to speak. Ian
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theague Mr. Monkey Pants!  More info | Jan 21, 2007 19:07 | #6 I prefer simplicity but that's just me. - Kody
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Hellashot Goldmember 4,617 posts Likes: 2 Joined Sep 2004 Location: USA More info | Jan 21, 2007 19:58 | #7  Permanent banI agree with #1 being distractive and #2 is difficult to read quickly. 5D, Drebel, EOS-3, K1000
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Jan 22, 2007 08:22 | #8 well, thats a pretty good consensus that its hard to read, which was my main concern. Thanks for all the honest opinions everybody! -Shehab-
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radiohead1075 Member 209 posts Likes: 12 Joined May 2006 More info | Jan 22, 2007 19:16 | #9 I think there's potential there, but as they are now they are too hard to read. 5D III | Fuji X-T10
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bill.br Hatchling 2 posts Joined Oct 2004 More info | Jan 22, 2007 19:24 | #10 Well if you could incorporate some of the interesting lines and relationships in a more legible version you may do better.
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PictureNorthCarolina Gaaaaa! DOH!! Oops! 9,318 posts Likes: 248 Joined Apr 2006 Location: North Carolina More info | Jan 22, 2007 20:06 | #11 The potential is there, you're using some good design elements and headed in the right direction. In #1, the zebra style is distracting and one character, the letter "f" ends up looking somewhat warped and diseased. I really do like #2... except for the wrap-around "J" It's disconnected from the "afari" to the extent the entire name reads "foto afari" with the "J" being some sort of "smile" in the design. Work with the "J" a little and you'll have something really nice in my opinion. /Dan Website
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Please dont take my opinion to heart, it is just my opinion. Youll get it soon, if this doesnt please you. Good luck.
