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Feb 01, 2007 19:12 |  #1

Please advice, I m willing to improve. Thank you ;)

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Feb 01, 2007 19:21 |  #2

hmm, not bad. id like to see more of her in the shot though. the wall to the right and the space above her head is a bit distracting to me. the lighting on her face is a bit strong too. good luck.




  
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Feb 01, 2007 19:36 |  #3

I think she looks great, but the rock/wall that she is leaning against is blown out and there is too much space above her, but otherwise I really like this! Beautiful model.


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Feb 01, 2007 23:24 |  #4

thank you so much :)




  
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Feb 02, 2007 05:59 as a reply to  @ sam0329's post |  #5

Nice capture, I agree with the other posts I think a tighter crop would make it even better.


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Feb 02, 2007 06:00 |  #6

Nice picture, and I agree with to much space above her head


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Feb 02, 2007 06:16 |  #7

Great model and pic, but I agree that overblown part is distracting. And I agree once more about too much space over her head. Do not put her in the middle of the pic, it would be rather more interesting to see her full lenght)


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