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sam0329 Senior Member 540 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Edmonton Alberta Canada More info | Feb 01, 2007 19:12 | #1 Please advice, I m willing to improve. Thank you
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yohana Member 112 posts Joined Jul 2006 Location: California More info | Feb 01, 2007 19:21 | #2 hmm, not bad. id like to see more of her in the shot though. the wall to the right and the space above her head is a bit distracting to me. the lighting on her face is a bit strong too. good luck.
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jamner Senior Member 648 posts Joined Nov 2006 Location: Nebraska More info | Feb 01, 2007 19:36 | #3 I think she looks great, but the rock/wall that she is leaning against is blown out and there is too much space above her, but otherwise I really like this! Beautiful model. Jamie - Jot Studio
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sam0329 THREAD STARTER Senior Member 540 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Edmonton Alberta Canada More info | Feb 01, 2007 23:24 | #4 thank you so much
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bbc14f Senior Member 682 posts Joined Dec 2006 Location: Toronto/Koeln Germany/Bree Belgium More info | Nice capture, I agree with the other posts I think a tighter crop would make it even better. http://www.flickr.com/photos/michaelalexander2008/
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JHHPhotgraphy Senior Member 288 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Morgantown, WV More info | Feb 02, 2007 06:00 | #6 Nice picture, and I agree with to much space above her head James
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White_Marten Senior Member 456 posts Joined Sep 2006 Location: Russia, Moscow More info | Feb 02, 2007 06:16 | #7 Great model and pic, but I agree that overblown part is distracting. And I agree once more about too much space over her head. Do not put her in the middle of the pic, it would be rather more interesting to see her full lenght) Canon 350D, BgE3 Tamron 17-50 f-2.8,Yupiter 85 f-2
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