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Mar 03, 2007 13:05 | #1

Never asked for C & C before, but would love to hear what I could do to improve...

Bob

Also...how do I get "OK to Edit" under my name?

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Mar 03, 2007 13:43 | #2

What is your Av?
My only suggestions are to shoot on a better day!lol

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Mar 03, 2007 14:04 as a reply to @ J D Skate's post | #3

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Any idea how I can add the Ok to Edit feature?

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Mar 03, 2007 14:13 | #4

its in your user cp =)

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Mar 04, 2007 01:37 | #5

very nice... I like this alot

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Mar 04, 2007 02:15 as a reply to @ knt3424's post | #6

Here is my quick edit...
made 3 layers

one for the foreground
one for the mountain
overlay for the sky
Adjusted saturation/brightness separately for each.
Also the WB is off on the original slightly blue so fixed that.
More time could be spent smoothing the junction between layers but I didn't want to be up all night working on it.

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Mar 04, 2007 02:27 | #7

hmmm I should have layered the house and toned it down then brought the forground layer up to show more detail in the trees.

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Mar 04, 2007 02:37 as a reply to @ strmrdr's post | #8

edit 2 toned down the house a little and upped the brightness for more detail in the foreground.
Didnt redo the layers and bring the mountain down but could put this foreground with the mountain above.

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Mar 04, 2007 02:37 | #9

how do you seperate each into different layers?

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Mar 04, 2007 02:45 | #10

disneydork06 wrote in post #2811344

how do you seperate each into different layers?

Magic wand then layer by cut or layer by copy for an overlay.
For the overlay need to blur the edges.
I usualy do this using the blur tool set to about 10% rather than a blur filter.
For these I just used the filter which is why its kinda rough.

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Mar 04, 2007 08:22 as a reply to @ strmrdr's post | #11

I hope my edit wouldn't get you mad.

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Mar 04, 2007 08:58 as a reply to @ Tareq's post | #12

Thanks for the comments. I think I'll go back and try some of your suggestions.

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