Sorry, but I am going to go against the grain here.
I think it looks rather like a badly taken "home movie". The jerkiness is great for a few seconds, then it all gets a bit too much. I think if this had been a collection of stills, with the usual "transitions" and the occasional "sequence" of movement (rather than jerky all the way through) it would be a lot more appealing.
In fact, the only part that I really liked, was the last couple of seconds where you had a couple of still shots which faded one to the other. The idea's OK, but I just don't think it works. Not sure how the B&G would feel after watching it through with Mother, Father, Auntie & Uncle, Gran and Granddad + friends and everyone else that want's to see it.
Again, sorry to not like it, but there's no point in me saying "great job" if thats not what I think.
Thanks for sharing anyway.
TJ