Please C+c I want any harsh comments out there, i can handle it. All my kid/baby shots are starting to look the same and I want to push my abilities.
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MikeMcL Goldmember 1,411 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jun 2006 Location: Dayton Ohio More info | Mar 06, 2007 07:59 | #1 Please C+c I want any harsh comments out there, i can handle it. All my kid/baby shots are starting to look the same and I want to push my abilities. 350d, 5d, 28-70L, 70-200L, 430EX,
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MagicallyDelicious Goldmember 4,083 posts Likes: 2 Joined May 2006 Location: Southport UK More info | Mar 06, 2007 08:06 | #2 That first one is just precious! every mistake is a lesson learned
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photomomof4 Member 55 posts Joined Mar 2007 More info | Mar 06, 2007 08:15 | #3 Hi Mike,
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TSEE Goldmember 4,961 posts Joined Mar 2005 Location: Middle of Nowhere, USA. More info | Mar 06, 2007 10:10 | #4 Both kids are adorable...and adorable shots but the major thing for me would be the crops, on the baby you've got this big black empty space on the right, I'd crop it so it goes away. And with the little girl, its adorable but now you've got space on the left and really tight on her head on the right. Is it cropped already or is it straight out of the camera? -Sue (TSEE)
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Mar 07, 2007 00:44 | #5 photomomof4 wrote in post #2824440 Hi Mike, Well first off I want tlo say I am not the master but I do take a lot of pics of babies and children and I know how it feels to sometimes get into the same rut doing the same thing. I went to your smugmug site and my first thought was I saw the same backdrop or two in every pic. Do you go to peoples homes or do you do most of your work in a studio? I go to clients homes a lot so I always have an abundance of new things to put in my pics. As for shots, I know there is only so much you can do with a 3 month old so I would suggest moving the baby around to different positions, this is a great time to get mom and dad in the pic and take some of them holding the baby. As for the kids, I try to take the majority of my kids outside, they are happier out there and I love to capture them being curious and trying to see what they see. I hope this helps, I think you have great composition you just a need to add a little flavor and step out of the box a little. Feel free to visit my website, like I said I am not a master, but you might get some ideas! Good luck www.thegibsonstudio.com
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Mar 07, 2007 00:49 | #6 TSEE wrote in post #2824867 Both kids are adorable...and adorable shots but the major thing for me would be the crops, on the baby you've got this big black empty space on the right, I'd crop it so it goes away. And with the little girl, its adorable but now you've got space on the left and really tight on her head on the right. Is it cropped already or is it straight out of the camera? The little girl shot could probably use a tad of levels, contrast and I dunno if its just me but it looks a bit on the red side, maybe its just an illusion with reddish background, headband and so on? They're adorable.
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Mar 07, 2007 00:51 | #7 Here is a tighter crop on the little guy. 350d, 5d, 28-70L, 70-200L, 430EX,
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photomomof4 Member 55 posts Joined Mar 2007 More info | Mar 07, 2007 08:44 | #8 Thanks for the comments on my site, I have worked on it for quite a while. MikeMcL wrote in post #2829531 I checked out your site, and I like it alot. I own MikeMcLane.com but havent taken the step to make it a nice site yet, it is just a crappy placeholder and I dont advertise it. I do almost all of my work in the studio, and i really should quit that. I love the control, invulnerability to the weather, and the privacy... But as you said - "step OUT of the BOX". Thanks for the tips. your site is nice - the babies on the railroad tracks are a bit weird/morbid but the pic is good nonetheless. TYVM!
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hawk911 Cream of the Crop More info | Mar 07, 2007 13:04 | #9 Love the first one; middle of the road on second. The third just bothers me and I don't know why. HAWK Photography Gallery
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