Took Liam to the museum today. I thought this one was nice. C&C, please.
Mike2005 Member 108 posts Joined Apr 2005 More info | Mar 15, 2007 20:33 | #1 Took Liam to the museum today. I thought this one was nice. C&C, please. 20D
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Mar 15, 2007 20:43 | #2 Sorry, here it is.... 20D
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kster Senior Member  551 posts Joined Jan 2006 Location: California, USA More info | Mar 17, 2007 14:02 | #3 My two cents...I don't really get the feeling that the animal is working in the composition; the child and the animal seem to be two unrelated subjects. I'm more interested in what Liam is looking at. Maybe it's out of focus that is taking my attention away from the animal. 1DmkIII and some lenses
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Robert_Lay Cream of the Crop  7,546 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA More info | Mar 17, 2007 15:10 | #4 Nice shot of Liam, but the moose has got to go. It's out of focus and does not contribute. (Seems to be an echo in here:lol Bob
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MrBSnappy Senior Member 400 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: Norfolk - UK More info | Mar 17, 2007 15:41 | #5 I think it has potential, I like the way that both the moose and Liam seem to be looking at the same thing. I'd maybe alter the composition so the moose wasn't directly above (maybe to the right having it look over his shoulder) and of course have it a bit more in focus. No matter how much you learn, there's always someone who knows more.
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Denovo Member 239 posts Joined Feb 2007 Location: Blackwood, NJ More info | Mar 21, 2007 13:36 | #6 I don't mind the moose being OOF and like the image but it would be much more powerful taken at a different angle. Right now the moose and the kid look stacked on top of one another - I would have liked to see the kid more to the left of the photo (since he seems much too centered). A careful selection of the child in PP will take care of this. Canon 7D ~ 16-35mm 2.8 L ~ 24-105mm f/4L IS ~ 100mm f/2.8 Macro ~ 70-200mm F2.8L IS II
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Mar 21, 2007 13:48 | #7 Denovo wrote in post #2907764 I don't mind the moose being OOF and like the image but it would be much more powerful taken at a different angle. Right now the moose and the kid look stacked on top of one another - I would have liked to see the kid more to the left of the photo (since he seems much too centered). A careful selection of the child in PP will take care of this. Thanks for all your responses. I am not crazy about how the moose is OOF either, although I was shooting in a low light situation w/out flash so had to use a very wide aperture. I am new to this, but I am assuming this is why the moose is OOF. I like the compostion though....the moose within the frame that is. 20D
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Robert_Lay Cream of the Crop 7,546 posts Joined Jul 2005 Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA More info | Mar 21, 2007 15:56 | #8 Mike2005 wrote in post #2907830 ... I am not crazy about how the moose is OOF either, although I was shooting in a low light situation w/out flash so had to use a very wide aperture. I am new to this, but I am assuming this is why the moose is OOF.... Correct! Bob
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