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Mar 18, 2007 11:36 |  #1

I'm nearing completion of the next update for my site. Could use feedback. Come on man! I need responses ;-)a


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Mar 18, 2007 16:15 |  #2

I think there is a better word than "insure" in this context ("We insure your images..."). Look up "assure" and "ensure" and decide what you really want, because it's NOT "insure".

The text under Portrait Sessions and Seasonal Sessions all runs together, partly because it is just too close together, but also because of that crazy spacing (forget what it's called) like they use in newspapers. I prefer simple left adjusted.


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Mar 18, 2007 17:59 |  #3

I thank you for thr grammar lesson (Not my best subject) .. Look and feel is what I'm poking for comments on.

I'll fix the paragraph justification .. Thank You Robert.

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I think there is a better word than "insure" in this context ("We insure your images..."). Look up "assure" and "ensure" and decide what you really want, because it's NOT "insure".

The text under Portrait Sessions and Seasonal Sessions all runs together, partly because it is just too close together, but also because of that crazy spacing (forget what it's called) like they use in newspapers. I prefer simple left adjusted.


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Mar 18, 2007 23:38 |  #4

I think the sessions listing should be vertical.
They way they are wont work well for someone using large fonts.

Always test your site by going view/text size/largest and make sure its usable.


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Mar 20, 2007 17:16 |  #5

With Portrait & Seasonal Sessions, line them up with the paragraph above it. I like the justification setting, but agree with Robert_Lay above that they seem to merge together. I suggest keep the justification, but put a vertical line like the ones by the word "galleries" to separate them clearly. Overall, I like what I see and I like the black background.


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